kyraid102

Still going strong I see. It may be slow to update, but the one thing I always like about authors that write slow, you can usually expect the best work out of them; they do not rush their story lines and everything is carefully spread out, looked over, and matched-up to make one of many perfect situations. It is almost like watching someone's life unfold as it happens. I can not wait for the next chapter. Thanks for another great chapter!

Seriously, after reading the description of the food, that was all I could think about. It was like I could smell everything! Now I want steak, but I know it won't be like this one and I am salivating! XD I loved this new chapter. Thank you for the update; I can't wait to read what happens next. HAPPY WRITING! :-D

NOOOOO!!!! More! I have to know more! I love this story; this is one of my favorites. I can't wait until to see how dinner will be. Thanks for thr story. Please update soon. HAPPY WRITING!!!!!

Another reason why I love this story so much! I also forgot to mention, your dialouge is really good. I am a little disappointed that it was so short, I wanted more, as a lot of us do and Joel's mom coming into the picture, I cannot wait to see how that plays out. Please update soon. HAPPY WRITING!

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"She was a pretty girl, don't get me wrong, but the biggest mistake I ever made was asking her how she was doing. She began talking at a hundred miles an hour endlessly in a high pitched voice that shot through me like a laser!..." - The rest of the paragraph from the point was so funny! (^o^) :A

This is such a great story and the comedy in it is awesome. I live in anticipation waiting for the next chapter to be put up. I have read a lot of stories and I have to say, this is the best story that I have ever read and you as a writer, I really like your style; the way you make everything play out is just amazing! I can totally see one of my friends in a situation like Derrick, it is as if I were reading someone's biography and I want more! Don't stop too soon now, you are really getting to the good stuff; explore more please! Happy Writing!