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  1. Thank you, thank you =)Im making it cute and fun so that it is easier for Andrew to grow close to Kevin. Kevin is going to stay true to his promise to be a gentleman. That hat man is going to pop up a lot more during the next several chapters, though it will be off scene. And don't be afraid to suspect Rick, he certainly plays a heavy hand in the dark side of the town.
  2. I apologize for breaking that, apparently I thought i was on the last page when I clearly wasn't. As you see I answered Andrews question from like page 8. Nefarious.
  3. Eradication. Andrew- I believe the goal is to keep it going, though I may be mistaken.
  4. 10 It was a week before Andrew decided to get serious about his search for a job. He had awaken early, showering and dressing casually. He combed his hair over and tested his friendliest smile in the mirror. Deciding that it would do, he put on his black boots, making sure to cover the tops with the cuffs of his jeans. He placed on a grey pea coat and headed out the door. He walked on the road to avoid soaking his pant legs in the four inches of snow that layered the sidewalks. Considering th
  5. Shatt3r3dGlass77

    Chapter 9

    He is slowly trying to open up to Kevin. He truly wants to get over David. I love that people think it is David =)
  6. 9 Andrew dropped the napkin as if it had burst into flames. DON’T GET TOO COMFORTABLE. The words bounced around his head, doing nothing for his already elevated heart rate. Thoughts ran rapidly through his head, all questions for which he had no answers. Who was the guy who had the hat on? Was he the one who had written it? What did he mean? Was he in danger? He sat on the sofa and cradled his head in hands. You can't tell Dee Dee. He couldn’t. It would only worry her and affect her work.
  7. Personally I love washed out blue eyes, ya know the kind that almost border being gray. As for hair i love a man with a red blonde hair. almost orange but with more brown.
  8. Shatt3r3dGlass77

    Chapter 8

    Thank you for your support and feedback =) Its much appreciated. Next chapter within 24.
  9. 8 They were quiet on the way back to Diane's, not in an awkward way. It was more of a mellow 'let's not break this' sort of silence. There was no need to speak, no need to say what they both already knew: what they had shared on the cliff had rearranged something in each of them. The weight that had hung over them had disappeared, leaving an unassuming silence. Nothing was required of them, save to share the moment. The concept was a new one for Andrew. He had always disliked silence in the pr
  10. 7 There is a certain weightlessness to swinging, an exhilarating freedom that many don’t experience beyond the playgrounds of long forgotten childhood. A small space in time where gravity doesn’t rule the whole world. At the moment when gravity had begun to regain the upper hand, just a millisecond before it would pull him back to the earth, Andrew opened his eyes and instantly his breath was taken. It was good that he was holding tight to the chains, or he may have fallen. The Atlantic ocean
  11. Shatt3r3dGlass77

    Chapter 6

    Thank you so much for the feedback Lisa =) The next chapter will be submitted tonight, probably approved by morning. Your observations of Andrew are spot on. It may stay stuck that way because I don't know how to make him stop. How do you break the bitch in a person? As for fowl, it may have been autocorrect or my speeding through it. and yes, i would say Im (;P) a person who hates the apostrophe. Again thank you so much for your review.
  12. 6 As they pulled into the parking lot of the buffet, Andrew tried to put the awkward conversation behind him, deciding that he really didn't care. Yeah sure you don't. He ignored his ever interrupting conscience. It was not serving him well as of late. He had always had trouble with inner conflict, but it seemed to be even worse lately. It was a bit draining. As they got out, Andrew smoothed his sweater, more out of habit than vanity. Kevin smacked his hand on the hood. "So..." he said, dr
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