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Thank you, thank you =)Im making it cute and fun so that it is easier for Andrew to grow close to Kevin. Kevin is going to stay true to his promise to be a gentleman. That hat man is going to pop up a lot more during the next several chapters, though it will be off scene. And don't be afraid to suspect Rick, he certainly plays a heavy hand in the dark side of the town.
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10 It was a week before Andrew decided to get serious about his search for a job. He had awaken early, showering and dressing casually. He combed his hair over and tested his friendliest smile in the mirror. Deciding that it would do, he put on his black boots, making sure to cover the tops with the cuffs of his jeans. He placed on a grey pea coat and headed out the door. He walked on the road to avoid soaking his pant legs in the four inches of snow that layered the sidewalks. Considering th
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He is slowly trying to open up to Kevin. He truly wants to get over David. I love that people think it is David =)
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9 Andrew dropped the napkin as if it had burst into flames. DON’T GET TOO COMFORTABLE. The words bounced around his head, doing nothing for his already elevated heart rate. Thoughts ran rapidly through his head, all questions for which he had no answers. Who was the guy who had the hat on? Was he the one who had written it? What did he mean? Was he in danger? He sat on the sofa and cradled his head in hands. You can't tell Dee Dee. He couldn’t. It would only worry her and affect her work.
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What is your favorite Hair/Eye color combination.
Shatt3r3dGlass77 replied to Forgottenrealms's topic in The Lounge
Personally I love washed out blue eyes, ya know the kind that almost border being gray. As for hair i love a man with a red blonde hair. almost orange but with more brown. -
Thank you for your support and feedback =) Its much appreciated. Next chapter within 24.
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8 They were quiet on the way back to Diane's, not in an awkward way. It was more of a mellow 'let's not break this' sort of silence. There was no need to speak, no need to say what they both already knew: what they had shared on the cliff had rearranged something in each of them. The weight that had hung over them had disappeared, leaving an unassuming silence. Nothing was required of them, save to share the moment. The concept was a new one for Andrew. He had always disliked silence in the pr
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7 There is a certain weightlessness to swinging, an exhilarating freedom that many don’t experience beyond the playgrounds of long forgotten childhood. A small space in time where gravity doesn’t rule the whole world. At the moment when gravity had begun to regain the upper hand, just a millisecond before it would pull him back to the earth, Andrew opened his eyes and instantly his breath was taken. It was good that he was holding tight to the chains, or he may have fallen. The Atlantic ocean
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Thank you so much for the feedback Lisa =) The next chapter will be submitted tonight, probably approved by morning. Your observations of Andrew are spot on. It may stay stuck that way because I don't know how to make him stop. How do you break the bitch in a person? As for fowl, it may have been autocorrect or my speeding through it. and yes, i would say Im (;P) a person who hates the apostrophe. Again thank you so much for your review.
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6 As they pulled into the parking lot of the buffet, Andrew tried to put the awkward conversation behind him, deciding that he really didn't care. Yeah sure you don't. He ignored his ever interrupting conscience. It was not serving him well as of late. He had always had trouble with inner conflict, but it seemed to be even worse lately. It was a bit draining. As they got out, Andrew smoothed his sweater, more out of habit than vanity. Kevin smacked his hand on the hood. "So..." he said, dr
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Furthering an Already Astounding Segregation
Shatt3r3dGlass77 replied to Shatt3r3dGlass77's topic in The Lounge
Unicorn Booty is actually starting to gain recognition in the gay community and on FaceBook. Despite their funny name, I find them to be a good source of LGBT news. -
Its good that you showed him opening up a bit. Im excited to see what happens at Christmas dinner.
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Thanks Nephy =) Im using the inner dialogue to supplement the parts of Andrews personality that I find difficult putting into the story without sounding robotic. I have been told that I am good at SHOWING the reader rather than blah blah blahing the reader. His inner dialogue plays a big role in the story. Also, everyone seems to be really interested in the Baseball Cap man, which I find ironic, considering I threw him in at the last moment, for no really good reason. I may have to play with him.
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Im glad you liked it Conner =)
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I hadnt intended that connection, but you may be on to something.
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Thank you for pointing thse out, I think I just get so excited that I mix things up hahaha. Feel free to point out any errors in the future.
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5 Kevin chuckled, his blue eyes lingering a little longer than the average guys would have. Andrew felt himself blushing deeply. “I…uhh…umm.” Kevin raised his hand to silence him. “It happens to the best of us.” He waited until Andrew had his pants on to hand him the pills and the glass of water he was holding. Andrew wanted to make some excuse, say something to make it less awkward. He knew he couldn’t, so he tossed the pills in his mouth and chugged the water, reali
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Between the sea and the moon (only when full though, I find my biggest inspirations, and tap into my deepest powers.
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Haha I would love to have seen that. I appreciate your last sentence, because that is truly how I want my reader to see it. Life picks at the scab on Andrews heart, at least when hes not doing it himself, anyway.
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Lessons In Leaving
Shatt3r3dGlass77 commented on Shatt3r3dGlass77's story chapter in Lessons In Leaving
Just about every forty-something in my life hahaha. Thank you for your words of encouragement =) -
4 He stumbled as he picked his way down the snowy slope that led onto the beach. It was slippery, and he began to slide, which caused him to drop the bottle. “SHIT!” he exclaimed in a mixture of frustration and horror. When he had regained his balance, he was grateful to see that the bottle had fallen in such a way that not a drop of its contents had been spilled. He picked it up, smiling at the bottle and his luck. Once he reached flat ground, he took another healthy swig.
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Shes a metaphor for the mother he never really had. And Daphne was the name of my first car. Talk about pouring your soul into your writing.
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It will show up in the next few chapters. Just wait for it. Its gonna be explosive =)
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Im glad I was able to touch that deeply. i want my work to evoke emotion. And dont assume the napkin is a good thing. *tease-tease*
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3 So…I don’t want you to be in the dark about everything.” He said as he traced the base of the now half empty glass. “So I'm willing to answer any questions about what's going on. Anything you ask I will answer.” I really hope I don’t regret saying that. Diane chuckled. “Now this could be fun. You’ll answer anything?” He shot her a furtive glance. “Almost anything, yes. I can’t just kiss and tell now can I?” She smiled. “I’ll go easy on you. Tell me a
