M.A. Church

Thank you.

"Baby Cujo" OMG, I about died. lol. Looks like there might be an addition to the pack too! Shell still cracks me up. And whoa, I'm really liking Miller. He's a badass to the bone. ~M

Whoot! Let's go kick some ass!!! Great chapter. Like how you're showing there are, indeed, other gay Alpha's out there. Got a feeling that's going to come in handy at some point. ~M

Dammit, Rob! *growls* Talk about left hanging lol. Good show of Buzz's feelings. Showing him how a pack works that's not homophobic was very much needed. He needs to *see* how things are different. Still growling about Shell, though. ~M

I don't see Buzz as a coward. Confused, scared, torn... yes. But not a coward. Can't wait for more. Rob.

There are some good points above. I don't think the chapter was too dark. If anything, it may not truly show the evilness Buzz is surrounded by. We did get a glimpse, though. The killing of the little wolf was done well, IMO. They view him as garbage and treated him as much. So why get emotional about garbage? The cold, remote feeling was perfect. I was repulsed, and I should've been as a reader. That she-wolf and her plans for their mating night? Just goes to show how cold she is too. She doesn't see that would be rape. Or doesn't care. Powerful chapter, Rob. ~M

The tension is good and thick, lol. Excellent! I feel for Jeb, but Buzz is the one that's really headed for trouble. *shakes head* That damn pack of his... This is going to be messy, I'm afraid. Can't wait, lol. ~M

Now things are going to get interesting lol. ~M

Man, Rob, that's a wicked tale you're weaving lol. I think I'm going to like Buzz. Curious as to why Colt wants the extra room. ~M

Man, I feel so bad for Jeb. He's hiding his pain and that's never a good thing. He suffers and that comes through. Great beginning to the new novel, Rob. ~M

*Pout* sad to see this end. I've loved every minute of it! Oh, but I can't wait to see what comes next. ~M

Ah, that was great as always! ~M

OMG. Damn, that was hot. Jeez, if that's what you come up with after a break then I'm all for breaks, lol. Like how you switched things up, and this deal with healing has me wondering!!! ~M

That was my fav part of the whole story, lol. Judas in wal-mart, having a fit. *grin*

*grin* Well, considering you edited it... *wink, wink*