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Daniel's story VIII ************************* "Alex...." The world had come to an abrupt halt. The slowly drifting mist that had parted to reveal the love of my life walking towards me was now still. There was absolute silence in the woods. All that I could hear was the sound of my heart pounding in my chest. How on earth could this be? After all these ears... Nay......centuries- how was my long lost love standing before my eyes? He looked the same as he had so many years ago. A long cold fl
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RECAP:Ch.01 to 18 ************************ Sean Geller lives in the town of Mystical Domus with his brother Aaron and aunt Amanda. His parents died in an accident last summer. His life has been disappointing since then with Aaron blaming him for their parent's death. But, fate has something else in store for him. Evan Damien has come to town. This new student/ stranger soon becomes his love interest, helps solve his life's issues, esp with Aaron. It is soon revealed that he is a vampire. Evan's
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The lock clicked making Jeremy wince. The low sound of the click seemed to echo throughout the silent hallway. His heart was thudding against his chest. He wiped the little drops of sweat from his forehead with the back of his hand and gulped. He had to go in. And hopefully, it would be one of those nights when Jacob returned late from his business meetings. Praying fervently, he turned the door knob and entered. The hall was dark. Jeremy stepped in and as a year of living in the apartment had c
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Aaron’s Story VII ************************ I lowered the magazine to sneak a look at Daniel sitting across the room engrossed in the newspaper crossword. It had been two weeks since we had spoken to each other. Since that dreadful night when he had declared the impossibility of any relationship between us I had been fighting the raging battle between my ego and my love for him. To be rejected should have made me immune to him, but it had strengthened the desire to be with him. However, I had m
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Chapter 17**************Sean's Story XI—The lover or the best friend.**********************************************It's been two weeks since Stefan was turned by the unknown vampire who had attacked me. These two weeks have been the most turbulent and testing times of my relationships, especially with Evan. Stefan had finally embraced the truth and had begun leading his life as a vampire. Rebecca had performed a spell that gave him some liberty to walk about in the sun when it was mild. Bright h
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Chapter 3 *************** “What do you mean you won’t go?” Tiara whispered excitedly waving her hands frantically. The professor stopped writing on the board and turned to cast a sweeping glance at the class. A multitude of innocent faces with intense academic expressions met his shrewd scrutinizing bespectacled eyes. He looked around for awhile, finally accepting defeat and resuming writing. Jeremy, on making sure that the professor was engrossed in the writing, turned to Tiara and whispe
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Jeremy felt a hand moving softly and delicately through his hair, disentangling them while caressing him simultaneously. He stirred but kept his eyes closed. He was snuggled under the blankets, warm and cosy and had no intention of getting up. He was still half asleep and had no idea who was caressing him; all he cared about was the good feeling of being touched with love. The soft hand was now on his cheek, softly plucking it and delicately touching. Then a low husky voice followed."It's mornin
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Chapter 01 ***************** “You know you should leave him. You deserve better, Jeremy.” Tiara urged to Jeremy and held his hand. Jeremy remained silent, staring out of the café window. It was a busy city. A long line of incessantly honking cars had formed on the road. It was snowing now and the slippery road made commuting a dangerous task even for the best of drivers. Everyone was in a hurry to be at home but the snow had other plans. The tricky pavement was as slippery as the road and tho
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Jeremy Green is a nineteen year old student. He has great friends, his grades are cool and everything is perfect. Or is it? He's living with his boyfriend: a young business tycoon Jacob Rochester. Jacob is not like the usual boyfriend. He is possessive. He wants his way. He always has his way. He scares Jeremy. He makes Jeremy writhe in pain. But Jeremy says he still loves him. How long will Jeremy say the same? A story of drama,pathos, love and obsession.
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Chapter 16 ****************** Aaron’s Story VI- It will never be. ************************************************ I hissed in pain and clutched the arms of the chair. The antiseptic Daniel had applied on the cut at the back of my head was stinging. Daniel stopped applying it and looked at me with concern and uncertainty. “Are you okay? I guess it’s stinging but I need to clean the wound lest it gets septic.” I nodded and he dabbed the cotton in the liquid and started cleaning the wound. T
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Chapter 15 ********************* Sean’s Story X—The story unfolds ************************************************** The vampire grabbed hold of my collar and pulled me closer to him. I struggle to escape. I tried to hurt him, but my attempts were feeble against his physique. He grasped my shoulders in an iron grip and pushed me against the wall. The sheer force of the blow made me see stars. However, he didn’t stop at that. He pulled me towards himself and banged me yet again against the wa
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Chapter 14 ******************* Aaron’s Story V—The Confession *************************************************** “Dude, I’m ordering pizza. What do you want?” Sean shouted from the kitchen. Comfortably seated on the sofa, watching a random Dracula movie (How ironic life is!) in the living room, I replied loudly. “The usual one would be great.” I heard him speaking our regular order into the kitchen landline and making his way to the living room. Jumping onto the sofa, he sat facing me, ey
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Chapter 13 ********************** Evan’s Story V *************************** “And that is why I ain’t affected by the sun.” I beamed at the awe on Sean’s face. A streak of sunlight sneaked from among the branches and hit his wide eyes sharpening the blue in them. The sparkling eyes kept me captivated, little registering Sean’s digestion of what I had just told him. “So, you’re saying that your vampire blood provides you immunity from the sun. That’s so confusing. All this while I thought th
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Chapter 12—True Love *************************************** Sean’s story VIII **************************** The sudden noise made by the screaming alarm cut through the dead silence in the room, pulling me out of the thoughts I had buried myself in. I sighed but didn’t take my eyes off the ceiling. With usual habit I extended my arm and hit the alarm shut. Immediate silence was restored. It was 7:00 am now. I hadn’t slept a wink seventh night in a row since the Halloween. Spending the nig
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Chapter 11—Halloween blues ************************************************** Sean’s Story VII – Separated ******************************************** I stood transfixed, unsettled and unnerved by what he had just spoken. His words were still ringing in my ears as the realization of the reality of the situation came crashing down upon me. I stumbled backwards for support. I couldn’t stand now. Leaning against a tree I fixed my eyes on Evan. He was teary-eyed as he gave me an appealing l
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36 Epilogue: Where The Demon Sleeps II
Eternal Ivan commented on Archangel_of_Pain's story chapter in 36 Epilogue: Where The Demon Sleeps II
Great job. Had me hooked for hours. :-D the characterisation is very good and the plot amazing. Thank you. :-) -
Sean’s Story VI – Halloween
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Glad you liked it...... Thanks. As to your guessing, we'll see in the next chapter. Regards, Ivan. -
“I am a vampire!” I growled at the mirror and started laughing. The costume looked perfect. I had spiked my jet black hair, paled my complexion and darkened my eye lashes and brows. Fake blood was dripping from the corners of my mouth while the fangs added authenticity to my outfit. “Someone’s looking wild.” The familiar voice with a hint of seduction made me turn and smile at my lover standing at the door. Evan stood there smiling charismatically and looking handsome as ever. I realized
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Daniel’s Story III – Ruth Morris *********************************************** The Mysticus woods were a beautiful and sinister manifestation of nature. Trees from the ancient age of Yore still stood deep-rooted, strengthening and spreading their regime. The forest’s floor was flooded with ferns and creepers while the thick foliage restricted the sun rays to the tree tops, maintaining a constant darkness below. Day or night, the forest and its beings remained oblivious to the time change.
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Sean’s Story I--- ‘The new guy’
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Thanks a lot..... Yeah the spelling errors are scattered.......Proof-reading isnt very enjoyable.. Ivan. -
Sean’s Story V – The Funeral I ********************************************* "May her soul and the souls of all the faithful departed through the mercy of God rest in peace." With the final words of the priest the coffin was buried and Tara Smith’s burial ceremony concluded. Evan put an arm around my shoulder and hugged me tightly. Emily and her mother were inconsolable as they wept bitterly now; having remained subdued throughout the ceremony. A number of people from town had gathered to a
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Thanks a lot for the review... Means a lot.....
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Daniel’s Story II – No one can know *************************************************** “I was lying on an ornate settee padded with velvet cushions while hot chicks dressed in bikinis were swooning all over me. Each trying hard to get my attention. One scantily clad bitch got on top of me and seductively moved her golden locks to reveal her soft neck. She bent over me and I bared my canines. As I bit she moaned. I drank and the moaning became intense. I relaxed my grip and she put her head
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“Soft, wet lips were pressed against mine. Demanding. Insistent. I let out a soft moan and rolled onto my back as Evan got on top of me. My hands started wandering. I had no control as they began exploring the sculpted physique of my Adonis. As they moved over the treasure he withheld, Evan growled. My little sensual gestures had arisen the animal in him. His fingers found the spaces between mine as he pinned me to the bed, his wet lips moving from my lips to my neck where he playfully bit me. A
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Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. Blood! Beautiful. Beautiful. That's my chain of thoughts as I read the story. Quite a christmas present for us. The serenity in the story and the fluidity of emotions accompanied with the simplicity of language with beautiful imagery make it a wonderful story. Loved it!
