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  1. Nellion Summers
    well..... i didn't really "love" this chapter like i loved the last one! i really hated the way andrew and mark came into the view! BUT hamen buddy, you didn't let me down, i liked the ending! how you put it all together. worth the wait anyway! keep going! i wanna see a sweet chapter like the previous one <3 i completely loved it, i read it 3 times
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    Chapter 1

    Nellion Summers commented on Nellion Summers's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you for noting that out, intune! Hopefully the next one that comes out would not have that problem! thanks for reading!
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    my eyes watered at the very ending scene of the chapter. I loved it. it was the best chapter so far. Oh, for the love of god, update the next chapter sooner! Please! I'm not gonna be able to sleep until i know what happens next. I'm in love with Charlie and Derek. They'd be so cute when they're together <3 just can't wait 'till that day comes.
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    Apart

    Nellion Summers posted a story in Fiction

    A short story about two boys in love and how the world tears them apart.
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    Chapter 1

    Nellion Summers posted new chapter in Apart

    OURS “Get away from me” Olivia pulled his 16 year old Son away from her as he cried in instant pain. “Mom, I’m so sorry, I can’t change it, I’m gay…. And I can’t help it, I love Troy” Sean cried on his knees trying to reach his mother’s hand. “Please, help me Mom, they’re gonna take Troy away from me, I can’t live without him, Mom” Continuously sobbing, Sean spoke. He fell on the ground as Olivia moved away. “Mom” He said getting up “Please” Olivia stood there her ey
  6. Nellion Summers
    "Charlie" is an awesome story. Good work, Hamen Cheese. I loved it. The way you've brought up the characters, especially Charlie is really great and adorable! It leaves me breathless waiting for the next Chapter. I just read Chapter 30. Restless to find out what happens next.
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    Charlie Derek
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    I COMPLETELY just loved it! Especially the way it ended, and how you've written it, marvelous! Good work!
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    I only read on Nifty! GA is better then nifty btw It's a great site!
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    Vanilla.. Yum!
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    bump-pump
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    gs ...no words, so new game! Summer
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