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  1. Chapter 4 The knot. Two months had passed since the start of the semester. It came with some benefits. For instance, new things. New awesome room. Check. New campus and classes. Check. New friends. Friends? Edited to ‘Platonic lovers’ or ‘crush material’. Between the tacky remarks, middle fingers raised, silent fights under the dining table and cheeky grins, my relationship with Sean had finally made some progress, as I liked to consider. It had been a week since he finally stopped
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    Made Up Rules

    Thanks Sam!
  3. Chapter 3 Made Up Rules Please, tell me I’m in the wrong house. A two-story minimalist house stood splendidly before me. It was snow white with matching wooden structures that hugged the residence in a breathtaking way. I turned around expecting a less outstanding sight only to be rewarded with other posh buildings. I double checked the address again. Should I go back? After all, I wouldn’t be able to afford a room in such a place. Looking through the clear glass of the lower level I not
  4. Thanks Stephen I'm glad you like Zach. Expect a surprise next chapter.
  5. Thanks ! I hope I can come up with better graphics soon
  6. Thanks Louis ! I hope you enjoyed your slice of pizza
  7. Thanks for the review! I wonder if things will keep going that smoothly
  8. Chapter 2 Divine Intervention “Thanks for your time. We’ll be going then,” I said with a smile trying to focus on her face. “Oh! I almost forgot. Here’s my card.” I hesitated for a moment before taking it. “Thanks again,” I answered before leaving the room. Her strong perfume, her squeaky and fake voice, her face plastered with make-up to cover the traces of multiple surgery interventions; everything about her screamed fake. She was someone I couldn’t trust. She was the epitome o
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    Low Profile

  10. Chapter 1 – Low Profile 8 months prior. As I scrolled down the webpage, I wondered if I was making the right choice. I had decided to “take the next step on the road to independence”. My parents were still reluctant to the idea, but they gave in. The university had implemented a new study plan. In short, it would move four faculties into a new campus, so starting next semester the students of those faculties would have to transfer there. As thrilling as that new plan sounde
  11. Thanks a lot!
  12. Thanks for your review! It seems like it will get -boring- in the first few chapters. I hope they don't let you down to stop reading it.
  13. Thanks a lot ! The first few chapters will be -boring- as they will set the 'environment'. I hope it wont disappoint you in the long term.
  14. How many times do you have to try to get it right?. No one knows. No one cares. Isn't it all about how much you lose halfway? No one replies. Is Zach, after all, ready to face it all?
  15. As I stood by the slightly open door with the familiar hand-painted mural around it, a sudden feeling of unease swept through my body. My heart throbbed irregularly and my whole body was unresponsive. A few minutes passed until I let out a silent but deep breath. So, in the end, it all had turned like this. I told myself. It really wasn't my intention to eavesdrop their conversation. Was it fate or just bad luck? Either way, I realized I wouldn’t be able to forget in a while. I felt my heart s
  16. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH. I EFFING MISSED UGLY DAVEY :'D (and you of course). Really good chapter, as expected from the great Em ! *roots for Dean and Davey*
  17. Hello everyone! I hope I posted in the right forum. Some time ago, I read a story (not sure if it was on GA) about a non sport guy (who I will call A) that falls for B (a guy in a cycling or running team - I dont actually remember, sorry). They start hanging out and the situation turns awkward afterwards (I think A kissed B ). A is depressed until he meets C (one of B's teammates and friend) who introduces him to their sport (cycling or running - sorry again). On the other hand, B is confused, and C cheers him up and talks to him about sorting his feelings out, etc In the last scene I remember reading, A gets called to the hospital/infirmary to get some results, and when he gets to the doctor's room he finds B sobbing. One detail I remember about the story, is that it's told in point of view of the characters ( A and B ) Sorry if I somehow confused you haha. Thanks for your help :3!
  18. Nice chapter, Em :3. CANT WAIT FOR MOAAAR!
  19. *nosebleeds* Can't wait for more *___*. I wonder if Dean is going to try something more than kissing.
  20. ^__^ can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work and thanks
  21. Meh, that's not creepy, so don't worry heh. Maybe that's why I always sit at the back, even though I have bad eyesight. That was such a comforting post :3 Thanks. Early Happy Anniversary? >w<
  22. Can't tell if those kind of things happen in -real- life. At least with me, love hasn't been generous to get my feelings reciprocated. Fortunately, I've never confessed to any of my crushes, nor I have talked (more than a 'what hour is it') to them enough to know everything about them. I do 'stalk' (more like watch them pass or see their facebook profiles/photos) them. I know, I just sounded like some sort of creep (heh).
  23. Keep it up and thanks for the hard work *---*. Can't wait for the next chapter.
  24. I loved 'Juste une question d'amour'. IMO, good acting and good looking actors (heh). Also, nice story line.
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