Hi,
This is my first post ever at the gayauthors forum, but I've been a Do Over fan since the first chapter. I just want to say that this is one of my favorite chapters ever . Everything is just where it is supposed to be. After everything Brian and David had to go through, this timeline is the perfect closure. I think this story should end with one or two more chapters, and after that Dan should go back to writing to Dawn of Tears, and at the same time a completly new story, in a way that only his mind can fathom.