DoctusDiAmora

andr0gene, I understand that you try to shift from different points of view throughout the Confounded series. Because of this, I have a few suggestions that you may want to consider. First, I would shift the story's focus to Tom for a period of time. As the reader, we don't know a whole lot about how he views the world: including his insights, frustrations, likes, etc. I believe that Tom's personality could completely open a new door of possibility if you delve into it a little further. The second thing that I would consider is adding a new main character into the mix. This could lead to a new jealousy or love affair between one of the older characters. Think about it, and best wishes.

Emmett left school that day, unsure of how to handle what had just happened. He replayed scenes, over and over again in his head, yet he could make barely any sense of them. However, there was one thing he was certain of. Emmett had strong feelings for the new boy, whatever those feelings may be. The bus ride home was filled with endless streams of erotic fantasies that made Emmett’s mind feel numb. In one of these fantasies, Jason was alone with Emmett in a dimly-lit room. There were numerous

From the vibrations, Emmett felt the pressure and heard the noise of the chair that was occupied by Jason. He gracefully leaned down and picked up the utensil. The divine boy then leaned towards Emmett, and became very close to the fair boy. Emmett felt tension that existed solely by the presence of this boy, who was so near to him. The warm air that came out of his nose tickled Emmett’s neck, sending a shock wave of responses from that small interaction. Every fine hair on his neck seemed to st

Emmett sat in his over-used, high school seat, which was located in a class he utterly loathed: English. The repulsive repetition of the old, inappreciable teacher seemed to lull him to sleep. The humidity of the room was evident, as many of the students found here were slowly removing layers off of their body. In this instance, the room was more of a sauna than a place of a ‘Highly-Esteemed Education Facility’. Recently, there had not been much to do with Emmett’s life. He completed all of his

Emmett's boring life is about to be awakened by lust and romance that will make him eternally remember his High School years. It will take him on a journey that will take him to heavens and above.

Fable!!!