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Mitchy was being an A-hole. I wrote this a long time ago, but much more elaborate. Huge fight. But once I re-read it, and added Tom's line somewhere, it became 'delete, delete, delete'. 😂 It was doing them a disservice, really. Build this up and then tear it down, then up again? Unnecessary drama, when talking to, instead of at, each other will do a better job. I thought. But you all be the judge. 😉

CHAPTER 16 --==Mitchell’s POV==-- Proposing to bring the cat - the idea formed into my head when, as I told Tom, I was perusing through the house. My initial thought - that the house was cold and sterile - had been just at first glance. It certainly had potential, if you wanted to make it a home. I personally have no desire to live near the sea, nor have a vacation place of some sort there. And definitely not at these overinflated prices. I took a closer look at the garage setup, with its c

INTERLUDE --==Tom’s POV==-- I couldn’t believe I crashed, it was such a newbie thing to do after travel - but Mitchell didn’t say a word about it. He didn’t even wake me directly, letting me sleep for a little bit. So I rushed, washing my face with cold water, brushing my teeth and changing my clothes, cleaning up the ones I’d left behind in The Vault when I went to shower, throwing it all in the hamper. Then I sprinted downstairs, finding him waiting for me on the deck outside. Thankfully,

Nope. It's been over two decades since I wrote it, have no recollection of the while thing so I simply don't know. Quite satisfying to let my mind fill in the blanks. This story rambles from all sides, unfortunately. 2 decades...yikes.

Yes they are. I'm re-reading and funnily enough, I don't remember ever writing this. There are decent parts, bad arts and REALLY bad part. I'm thinking Kyle is a good antagonist, but Mark is just a dweeb. *shudders*

I never really got the chance to give the character some meat. He's a pretty one-dimensional character in Confounded 1, barely fleshed out in 2, so 3 was my chance. Or is it actually 4, and am I writing someth....nahhh, I wouldn't do that. Would I?

The plan always is to finish every story but I can only write when I'm in the right mood. It took a long time for that to come back, this time (but not the first time that happen, lol).

CHAPTER 15 --==Mitchell’s POV==-- I turned left on Lincoln Boulevard while we were chatting away, heading toward Venice Beach. “Did you see much of London?” I asked. “Nah,” he answered, “when you have a job like mine, you basically only see the airport, the highway, a hotel room, the place you work at and maybe, maybe a restaurant or two. On this trip, aside from the hotel and restaurant, just long hours in a warm studio.” “That’s a waste,” I muttered. “Mhm, I know. I’d

I'm here and writing again. I really should learn not to post ongoing stories, it's not fair to you all. I'm hoping to finish the next chapter tonight. If I do, I won't send it to the editor (if he's still there, ofc) because OMG, it's been almost 2 years. I. Am. Horrible.

You were right, there was a line in there, about pressure from his parents. Removed. Thank you. 🙏

I will. 😉

Though I agree on religion being the root of all (much) evil, I cannot remember writing that the grandparents insisted on baptising these kids. If so, please point me to it, because that was unintentional. They did not. It's Mischa's thing and Kit agrees.

Funnily enough, your comments have made me re-read once again, and once again inspire me to write in the world of characters. Watch for an additional chapter soon. Somewhere...possibly Confounded III (hint, hint).

Yeah, that'll mess a kid up. It'd mess a grownup up, too.

Maybe not? 😉