Ponche

why do you need someone to edit it o.O?? hey...send it to me (btw sorry that im just writing continuation of our "talks" on random chapters...bah)

i need a release date for the 3 part...right NOW <3

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGMOGMGOMGMOMGOMG THERE IS GONNA BE BOOK III? I FREAKIN <3 YOU!

yo....so what happen to Ariel after all? (yeah ive already read the epilogue)

i have no idea how you do it but you REALLY transform your mind into anothers person mind while you write. like for ex the part when he asks for painting material and wonders if he has gone to far and if Tony is gonna beat him. I was like" lol why da fuck is he gonna beat you?" but then i thought yeah thats what someone who has gone through all that would think its like you remember all of those lil details,a life that aint yours maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan youra genious<3 ps i would love another story like this....but still in slavery (forgive me my sickness)

naaah...i was expecting more sex, but i guess its just because ima dirty lil hoe haha....and i fell proud when i say it -.- godddddddddd.... btw.....could you paleashe for all the vegan ice creams and nyan cats in the world make a sequel to Fallen(ya know the hot vamp dude) ??? oh and hey.....yeaaah ive been listening to a hell lot of itty bitty piggy....fucks my brain lol #imabadbitch

hey..remember me from yesterday? I spent this weekend in practically no-sleep mode to end up reading all the story well lets see : 4 microwave pizzas and 6 bottles of Cola-Cola in sending you the diet pills bill, kaiiz? oh....and btw do you write professionally ? if you dont you SHOULD.... i would love to pass a book store and see at the vitrine "Nephylims new sold out book (i wanted to specify but idk whats on your mind....please forgive me for not figuring out such an eeeeeeeeasy thing ) and hey...loved the story <3

that motherfucker again? DAMN its already almost 2 AM and i was thinking about going to sleep but nope,i guess not. and btw.....is it wrong all that shit made me hard? ....its good to know im not the only person with such a depraved mind... i mean,im not sure if its good, but at least im not alone.... but god,its REALLY scary to think where the human mind might go...for some reason i always realize that while reading you stories (and thinking about mine)

before i was waiting for wednesdays to see jenna marbles videos.... now to keep reading this beautiful story<3 (btw i made a mistake and put an empty review on chapter 9....any idea how to remove a review lol?)