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Racer

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  1. A very long and well deserved acknowledgement of your tremendous talent!
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    Cupid's Arrow

    Dude, now I wish I had more time to read instead if quick bits here and there. I think Michael has a crush on Asher. He shower and changed before going to the bar and changed again before pizza and beer for the game--Total Crush! Michael kind of grows on you more each chapter. I really need to find more time to read-- can't we have like a 32 hour day?? LOL! You're such a good writer.
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    Piperton

    Michael is so oblivious to the world around him unless it relates to him. It's good to see him sober but I still don't know if I like him yet. Now, Jonsie on the other hand- Where can I find one of those? He sounds like he could be a LOT of fun
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    This is not a date!

    Rubs hands together with an evil smile! I love Asher's reactions, he is so cute! I can't wati to see what happens
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    Déja Vu

    OK, this might get addicting! I thought about skimming the next chapter and got sucked right in!
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    Pour Me Another

    Nice start. I like Ash, but I think this Micheal guy is going to be more trouble then he's worth, We'll see
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    Book Cover

    If I saw this on the shelf in a bookstore, he would be going home with me! I'm intrigued. I like that you have a visual to start.
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    Chapter 1

    This is a very sweet look into your real life. Thanks so much for sharing!
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    Shepherd's Crook

    Poking around this weekend, I noticed that they let the readers vote on their favorite stories for the year. I think a lot of your readers agree with me when I say that this is my favorite story. It is better than a lot of stuff that I've bought online. Again, WTG KC you've done a awesome job!!!
  10. I'm glad that Amanda got to suffer. Death would be to easy for her. I like that we see this last part from the sister's eyes but you still found a way to tell us that Gibby is ok and happy. Finding this site was by accident. Then you responded to emails, I thought that was the coolest thing ever. Stumbling into this in the middle had me hooked and I was glad that I could go back and read it from start to finish (even if it took me a few daays to figure out how to actually send you my coments) Your so talented, I can't wait to see what you have planned next!
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    Chapter 20

    I didn't think you would be able to pull it off in 1 chpt but you did. I really like that Gibby's mom made an apperance. I think he needed that closure to move on but how is he going to go on without Tanner? I know I've said it before but WOW- this entire story was WOW! You should be so proud! I can tell by the readers and comments that this has really touched a lot of people. Now off to read the epilgue
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    Chapter 19

    I can't believe this is coming to an end. It's too soon. There is still too many questions that I need answers -- off to try and find them--or I'll revert back to my email attacks!!
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    Chapter 18

    What was that all about? The jerk from the pizza place shows up and Gibby goes and talks to him? What?
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    Chapter 17

    Now I'm wondering if the cops will step in or will they be trying to cover it up too? I still want that bitch to fry! lol
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    Chapter 16

    Another great chapter. Is the net closin in on Amanda? She has to know something is up and that worries me. She's already killed once what's to stop her from doing it again?
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    Chapter 15

    I was already planning my remarks but you have a redeeming quality as a writer. You bring out the best and worst in these character--such an awesome story!
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    Chapter 14

    What a rollercoaster! Only you can go from horny to sad to mad as hell. Bi-pollar much?
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    Chapter 13

    Uugh I just want to scratch that bitches eyes out! Please make her suffer!
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    Chapter 12

    I like that even with such an emotional and dark story you still find ways to add humor. You really keep the readers guessing.
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    Chapter 11

    I hate that Tanner is still defending his 'friends' when they were the ones to cause his death. He's such an awesome character. If you had to kill him, I'mm glad that he's still around.
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    Chapter 10

    Ok I was really mad at you at first when I read this but then I calmed down and tried to rememer that this is a story and not real life even if it feels really really real. Your writing is so life-like that I can almost see them. I kept waiting for Tanner to jump up and say he's ok but that doesn't look like the case Thanks for sharing your mom's view of your story. I know it must be hard still.
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    Chapter 9

    Oh my what a bad feeling! Amanda is losing!
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    Chapter 8

    The POOL! The pool- the pool- this is what brought me to this website in the first place. This chapter was so amazing! You are such a telented writer. I wanted to tell you but it looks like a bunch of other readers beat me too it! I have to stop for now but I can't wait to telll you what I think about the rest of this story.
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    Chapter 7

    I agree with your other readers Mr. Grim that you have a twisted mind-- I mean story! It keeps the readers guessing and guess what-- I'm off to the next chapter
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    Chapter 6

    Oh I forgot to tell you in the last comment how much I'm really liking Tanner but glad I didn't because I like him so much more in this chapter to
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