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Mark Paren

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    Live in San Francisco born on the peninsula.

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  1. You warned us that this story was a “high school satire where every internet trope you’ve ever read shows up with glitter and trauma.” Who doesn’t love glitter and tropes! Thanks for writing this.
  2. Mark Paren

    Chapter 8

    The sequel is outlined. One of these days I’ll pick it up again. This is the first part of a trilogy. Thanks for the comment.
  3. Mark Paren

    Chapter 1

    Good point. There are so many “if onlys.” It took a while, but in the end things turned out well for me. It’s an old adage often directed at young gay boys. “Things will get better.” It’s usually true. Thanks for the comment.
  4. Good chapter. I love adventure and discovery stories … and maybe romance?
  5. I left my boyhood town when I was thirteen and always dreamed of returning and hooking with my old friends and potential love interests (crushes). I returned twenty years later and sadly everyone had gone their own way. I hope things work out better for Ian. I enjoyed the chapter.
  6. I love the concept and looking forward to the next chapter.
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for the comment. I think I started out, similar to you, as a boy being open and inquisitive about his sexuality. One deeply traumatizing event changed the course of my life. It took many years to overcome the shame and fear.
  8. I have confidence in you. 😉
  9. I’m an outliner, but I always end up going back and editing awkward passages.
  10. You don’t know what happens in the chapter after next? You must be a pantser (or a no pantser).
  11. The tension builds!
  12. Sounds like you were much more adventuresome than me.
  13. The games we play. But games are often fun!
  14. Mark Paren

    Chapter 1

    A painfully emotional first chapter (in a good way).
  15. Mark Paren

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for the comment. Coming-of-age isn’t always easy..
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