Jeff Burton

At first I thought the best part of this chapter was the negotiation, negotiating the Telly code was 😂 And then we get to the literal heart of the matter. No fucking wonder Ben can be a monster. @Topher Lydon I have to hand it to you mate. I absolutely hated Ben in the first book. I literally tore him apart in every comment I made about him, for you to be able to flip the script on that and make me actually feel sorry for his murderous ass is one hell of not only writing but character development as well. Is this one going to be the love story then? 😂 Can our axe swinging Tin Man find a heart? Because it’s looking like his initial interest in Riley is going to turn into something that could absolutely destroy him if he’s not careful.

I don’t know if you’d want it. It’s pretty specific about what it wants to write. But give me a couple of days to turn that rough into something readable I’ll sent you the first two chapters. it’ll make you lol just because of what it is.

You just confirmed my thoughts on Ben. I saw it immediately when I started to see the humanity. Good job Riley.

Muse decided it wanted to come back abruptly. I ended up writing 10,000 words before my brain finally said “i need sleep.” And now I’m in a rush to get the heck out of the house because I overslept and I got bills to pay, 😂 When I get home I’m so gonna do another 10 and just keep going till either I finish something or burn out again because that’s how my brain operates. So if I go quiet in the next couple of days on the forums that’s why.

Could be worse. At least you aren’t something I created via a hallucination lmao.

lmao I noticed. In case anybody is wondering wtf we are on about if you ever want to know @Kileoli’s actual point, or the important thing he meant to say, just skip to the last paragraph because literally that’s where the important stuff shows up. And he’s very consistent with this. I just find it amusing 😂

If you can’t dazzle them with brilliance then baffle them with bullshit. 😂

I know it’s morbid but I’m adding to my final wishes if we’re all still here for someone to log into my account, do the appropriate notifications then change my mood to dead because I’ve just got that kind of sense of humor.

When your tired and your vision is hazing in and out it almost looks like a triple entendre lol

So I’ve been doing a lot of research for a story, a lot of notes. I still have endless questions a half figured out plot and it got me thinking: This is why I didn’t go to college, research is friggen exhausting.

That’s a rookie rank, work yourself up to nasty.

I’m left handed that’s probably why I’ve got an iPhone.

This is totally the image I had in mind when discussing good parenting.

You weren’t productive today. We discussed this. It’s lashings for you.

I would just like to say… we kinda did it again on the off topic 😂 same culprits different thread. ❤️