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A little home schooling never hurts!
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The first time is always special. Not always in a good way, but Matt and Jakob got lucky.
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It’s particularly nice when feelings are reciprocated. Thanks for commenting.
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** “It’s OK,” I said. “Emma, it won’t work for Oscar and me, and it won’t work for you and Frank. Give it a shot. I want you and Oscar to be happy.” She looked at me with a sober expression and said. “I couldn’t do that.” “I want you to. Please.” ** “I’ll think about it,” said Emma. “But I’m worried about you.” “Don’t worry, I’ll be OK.” I tried to convince myself as much as Emma. “I’ll tell Oscar that he can ask you out.” She took my hand with a sorry look and
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There are sometimes lows before the highs. Don’t forget Ralph.
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Life’s like that sometimes and it’s more painful, the first time around.
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Good observations. Goes to show, that being perfect, isn’t perfect. This is my first first person POV story. I’m still trying to find my way. Thanfs for the comment.
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Matt’s in a bad place. Will it affect his judgement? Thanks for commenting.
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I think you’re right about the danger at home. Thanks for the comment.
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Thanks for the comment. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
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** “We were born into this life, and when we reached maturity, we rejected it,” said Oscar. “I hope, in time, you will understand. Until then, we realize you might want nothing to do with us, and we will honor your wishes.” Oscar looked at me, and a tear streaked down his cheek. I had a lot to figure out. We all had a lot to figure out. ** “We’re going to conceal the artifacts in the pond now,” said Frank. “We’ll drive you back to the city when we finish.” “I need
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I’m trying to build suspense, but I promise to provide most of the answers by the end of the story.
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I can try, but I doubt it will be coherent. 🙃
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Give me a break! I post a new chapter every week or two. 😉
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All good questions, some of which I plan to explore in upcoming chapters.
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Good point, I’ll fix it.
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It's not easy at any age. Thanks for commenting.
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You may be right. Stay tuned. Thanks for the comment.
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Thanks for the comment. Leaving the Norwegian Ahnenerbe is a big step for the boys. They need support.
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Good comment. I suspect Matt has other things on his mind other than sex, but things can change quickly with horny 15 year olds.
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** “Ahnenerbe depends on secrecy to survive, and the other branches consider us dangerous,” said Frank. “What do you plan to do?” Emma asked. “We plan to expose them and eliminate them as a risk,” stated Carson. “It will be difficult to convince enforcement agencies of their existence and even more difficult to convince them to take action, but their influence is growing, and we must act soon. They have powerful allies.” ”What can I do to help?” I asked. “Yeah, what
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I think you’re onto something.
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T The young often leap into supporting causes before understanding the repercussions of their actions. They might change their minds when they learn more.
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You may be right. “Eliminate” doesn’t always mean kill, but it might in this case. Thanks for the comment.
