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  1. KennethNolan

    Chapter 11

    This is an awesome story dude, I loved this chapter and the reaction that Greyson had when he seen Asa and Chandler, Loving the storyline too, a lot of stories like this just consist of sex but this had a great balance between the storyline and the cute relationships and the awesomely hot sex scenes, I really hope to see this story continuing and can't wait for the next chapter to see what the boys get up to next, keep up the good work.
  2. I'm smiling like a complete idiot right now, that was just sooooo cute, the date was perfect and now they are officially dating, I'm so happy they are finally together now i was sad when i seen this chapter come to an end I just can't get enough of this story. I'm really looking forward to seeing everything 'Jesse' when they are hanging out during the weekend and when Tristian is around Artie It's gonna be amazing. Thank you so much for updating again dude, love this story and I can't wait for more Tristian and Jesse cuteness in the next update keep up the good work
  3. Loved this chapter dude, Jesse and Tristan are sooooo cute together, can't wait for the next chapter, this is my favorite story by far and i'm dying to read more, keep up the good work!!! Please update soon lol
  4. OMG! this story is soooooo good Please keep it coming!!! I love the plot sooooo much, Jesse and Tristan are so cute together and I love the way your developing their relationship and how excited they are when around and talking to each other, the nervousness they feel towards each other is so real when your on your first date and have your first boyfriend and I think that everyone can relate to that. I'm Loving Lori's reactions too, the squealing and how crazy she's being is sooo funny. I can't wait for Tristan and Jesse's next date i'm so excited and i'm really looking forward to Tristan meeting Artie again and his reaction towards Tristan considering what he said about him haha poor boy really needs a boyfriend of his own, hopefully that's where little Scotty comes in. I'm soooo happy that Tristan finally got over Jason Fixx, that asshole deserves to be miserable for what he done to Tristan. Anyways, i'm really happy to see a new chapter and hope you keep up the outstanding work, this is the best love story I've read on GA so please please please update the story as fast as humanly possible haha. Thanks Comsie!!!!
  5. Thank you so much for the new chapter I loved it, The way they were both nervous at the start and how they get a little more comfortable with each other as the date goes on was prefect, exactly the way a real first date would be. The kiss scene was awesome, I loved how Tristan even got off the bus to walk Jessie home it was sooo romantic. your an awesome writer dude, this series is so good. can't wait to see the next chapter, gonna be checking every day for a new one, it's going to be awesome. thanks dude, keep up the awesome work
  6. P.S. do you need to read New Kid in School first to read this because I was planning to read it after this in-case of spoilers but I also don't wanna miss out on important info that I might need to know from it, really curious but don't know what to do haha
  7. KennethNolan

    Chapter 12

    Hey, I just read this whole story from start to finish all day today and I think it's brilliant. I love it so much. I love how you developed Ariel and Tyler's relationship and how it all came together, there like the most perfect couple I've ever read about out of the hundreds of stories that I've read EVER!!! I love how shy Ariel is about their relationship and the way he describes how he feels every time he even thinks about Tyler is so romantic and makes me feel all mushy, in a good way haha, every time I read it, you got that feeling perfect and I could even feel the love that Ariel has for Tyler just from reading this story. I have only ever felt like that with two stories; this and Jessie-101, which is also one of your best stories. I seriously think you are a brilliant writer for being able to do that when most writers can't and you are by far my favourite author. I can't wait to see what happens next in this story and how Ariel and Tyler's relationship develops, so keep up the good work dude.
  8. I can't believe that you posted this so fast, when I saw that you updated my heart nearly exploded. I was so happy to see a new chapter. I loved how nervous Tristan was when he was getting ready for his date with Jessie, I still remember the exact same feeling when I was going on my first date with a boy, I just wanted to run as far away as possible and I think you got that perfect in this chapter and when Tristan was telling Lori about his date with Jessie and she nearly started crying, I did too. It was like I felt so proud of Tristan for being brave enough to ask Jessie out on a date, even though this is just a story (which I know it is, I'm NOT crazy ) but it felt real and like this is all happening and that's why I think your the best author EVER and this is the best story EVER. Dying for the next chapter I can't wait for it, you're awesome BYE
  9. HEY. I'm so glad that you posted a new chapter, when I seen that you updated I went all the way back and read the whole story again to get me even more excited for the new chapter. I loved how much thought Tristan put into going to the mall and when he didn't, how sad that made Jessie and how they ended up talking on the phone and it was so cute how nervous they both were. I liked the fact that Tristan asked Jessie out for coffee and donuts, I found it hilarious and cute at the same time. I seriously think that this is the best story I have ever read and it makes me all giddy when I think about what happens next, its the perfect story. I honestly can't wait for the next chapter and I really hope it's soon because i'm about to explode with anticipation. BYE.
  10. hey I'm loving this story its awesome. I love how you built up to them meeting and how cute it was when they finally did it had me all excited and happy for Tristan. I like whats going on other than Tristan meeting Jessie, his old relationship with Jason and Scotty's crush on Tristan but if things go further with Tristan and Jessie I can see Scotty and Artie getting together. I really like your other stories too, there great especially Billy Chase I'd really love to see a new chapter of this story or at least a short summary of what happens next if your not finishing it and i can tell other people would too. I'm completely hooked on this story and all I find myself thinking lately is what happens next? or do they meet again? or will they never see each other again?, like i said completely hooked. I know its a wild shot considering you haven't updated in nearly a year but I really would love to see a new chapter. LOVE this keep up the good work lol bye
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