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I would pick Jude. There are things I want to know more of him. I know his past was covered in TOU <-----(HAHAHA this acronym spells out my real name. don't believe me? ask me!)but, not extensively and I want to know more. I would like to see a spin off for Jude in the future. I wanna learn more about his family and I want him to reunite with his siblings. And I wonder if Quinn's mom would change the way she views Quinn after meeting Jude's parents. I think she'll feel shameful of what she put her son through. I think seeing what others are capable of, she will reflect on it and really become a changed person.

WOW!!!! :worship: This story is getting to be really interesting. How long do we have to wait for the next chapter? ughrrrrr!!!!! I want the next chapter NOW!!!!!!!! :pissed: I really like the Travis and Dennis paring. Although I do feel really bad for Owen for falling for someone who's not interested in him and then getting hurt furthermore. I'm glad it seems like he's happy for Dennis. He's such a great guy. WTF is Aiden's problem!?!?!?!?!

It's "blind love" they are experiencing. They are falling for each other big time and they haven't realized it yet because of their personality. Travis doesn't want a relationship and Dennis shackled himself in the closet.

Hmmm........could there be a suprise visit from a certain someone from his past?

I definitely think that Dennis is atleast bi and may even be gay. Most straight guys would have reacted to advances like that in a defensive manner. Dennis, well, it seems like he was actually enjoying it. he brought his hands up to Travis's shoulders and just held it there. Not pushing or shoving Travis back. Also, it seems as if Dennis was mad at Reiley for interupting the moment. If it was any other situation, Dennis would have been modest to Reiley like he has been since the beginning of this story.

It seems as though Dennis needs counseling help. Could Ben be the one to offer that kind of help? I think we will eventually learn what really happened on that day. Will Dennis come to term with his inner demons and reconcile with Ben? Wow........this is why I love Dom's stories so much. Keeps you wanting more and more.

I hated when stories end like this. So frustrating. There is like no ending. Makes you want to know more. But some stories just have to be like this. Makes me think of "The Giver" and "The Grapes of Wrath". They all leave us at a cliffhanger and not only that, they were all excellent books to read.

Here is a list of stories I have read over the past years that I have really enjoyed. Try: Stormfront - www.stormnation.com Journey of Love - www.crvboy.com (under the author Journeyman) For the love of Pete - www.Deweywriter.com Anything from Comicality The Magic In Your Touch and The Way You Say My Name - www.crvboy.com (under Sara Bell) These are some of the best stories I've read until I stumbled upon your work. There are more but can't remember them.

Nice try.....but i don't think so. Remember, Brian is holding people hostage at Frank's house. So it coudn't be him in that "hole". It might just be David. Ok, now I have no sympathy for Mary whatsoever. She deserved what she got. It's no wonder why David is the way he is. And if he did indeed kill Mary, that's justifyable. As cold and heartless David seems to be, there is so much sympathy for him in this chapter. No kid should have to go through so much deprivation of love and affection. Not to mention, the physical and emotional abuse he receives on a constant basis. Another great chapter!!!!

And all we can do now is wait. Hopefully, it is not one of those months long wait.

I already did that when I finished this chapter. Now more long and agonizing wait for another chapter.

Also, why was Oliver in the basement during the one night Frank tried to rescue David?

If my brother whacked me with a tree branch, i would want to know why. Oliver did not mention anything about the attack he received to David during window conversation. Also, if indeed the assailant was David, what reason does he have that would prompt him to hit Oliver? So I'm sticking with the idea of Oliver and David being one person.

If Oliver and David are actually two person, then why would Oliver be in the basement with David. It seems to be that the basement is used to punish David. Remember, David is the one that gets punished for everything he does and including what Oliver does, not Oliver.