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An Answer in a Question
Topher Lydon commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in An Answer in a Question
He's there, that's what counts. Little Eli, he's like a child's Teddy bear, Battling ALL the monsters and demons that stalk a child at night. -
see, told you he had a first name
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You, he's talking about you lot here :: grins in fourth wall breaking amusement :: “Them,” Stoker answered, darting his eyes about the room as if invisible eyes were upon them, “the ones watchin’ us play the game.” His tone, usually light, held a sudden edge of seriousness that sent a prickle down Wojciech’s spine.
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Eyrie - Æuum – Charlie Site Light seeped in through the billowing canvas tarps, rippling noisily in the wind. Wojciech opened his eyes, shivering in the chill air and snuggling down beneath the heavy fur blanket Stoker had dug out the night before when they had arrived in their claimed ‘home.’ The scent of pine and damp earth, foreign yet increasingly familiar, clung to the canvas, a stark contrast to the sterile air of their previous, more temporary refuges
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There purely to create chaos. And would have been picked up on, dealt with by MI5 were it not for Dafuq :P oh man now you got me doing it
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They were the first representation I ever saw. We need more Coded Bear energy in our lives.
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A magical place where a gay bear couple abscond with picnic baskets frequently
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I *might* have forgot
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you're smarter than the average picnic basket loving wild animal from Jellystone park
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We've had the pride, now comes the fall
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Enrico's Apartment, Canary Wharf, London The morning light streamed into Enrico's apartment, illuminating the sleek, cold surfaces of the kitchen. Enrico’s cell phone sat on the polished quartz counter, a dark, unassuming rectangle of technology. Ezra’s gaze kept drifting to it, a constant, magnetic pull, a tiny, defiant beacon in the sterile order of the kitchen. Enrico was still in the living room, a distant, silent silhouette against the panoramic window, lost in contemplation of the Lo
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Jeff putting Will up there directly with 'God' was probably the worst thing to do to someone going through everything Will has gone through in this book so far. Well second worst, next chapter probably tops it.
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fan theory : Simon is Rowan. and Elijah is Simon.
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I'd never tried Historical Sci-fi before, so weird a niche genre.
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Thanks, it started off as I said something random I was writing to take a break from my other projects. But I am enjoying coming back to it.
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Isn't the core of 90% of relationship problems, an refusal to talk to each other... or an inability to?
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Eli, there's a little warrior. And it takes a special kind of man to slay demons. The kind that Eli is fighting aren't even his own, and yet he's not giving up. Nobility showing what the others in Simon's life should have done for him. Compelling reading, and I wish you luck on this one, it's going somewhere.
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I still have that chapter open on my desktop, could certainly add something... though given how pissed Stoker is in the scene I'd pity the person/thing that tries...
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A snippet of this morning's writing, chapter 30:
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Stoker knows what he wants, as you put it so well. And Hugo's a bit of a dork, but he's starting to get there.
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Kulai City - Æuum – Bravo Site Deep in the back alleys of the city, tucked away from prying eyes next to a large sceptic canal that reeked of something foul and noxious. Sinjin’s workshop sat, just another rickety, narrow shop front that teetered threateningly on the edge of falling into the canal. The air here was thick with the metallic tang of the canal, overlaid with the sweet, cloying scent of exotic spices from unseen vendors. The bells on the door jangl
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shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh givin' all my secrets away....
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So I am now at war with the bramble bushes that have taken over my back garden. Considering my mobility, the bramble bushes are winning this war... Four weeks I had them all cut and dug out of my back garden. Here we are today and I have lost nearly half the garden to the things, they grow so fast and nothing seems to work. I am considering renting a goat.
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That is an amazing idea... thank you. This error would also explain where some of the problems we discussed in private might have occoured. The Missing Jared Scene we discussed that I was sure I wrote and yet is missing in the final copy.
