Jordan1

I was excited to see a new chapter added and I immediately read it on my 'smartass phone' in the middle of the night. Ha! I concur with a previous review from Todd456 that this storyline is all fantasy and fiction……so we live a very small portion of our life vicariously thru Billy's teen growth and adventures—and sex, and lots of sex! If I wanted straight and true high moral standards and fidelity, I know where to read those. If I want adventure, sex, and excitement, I look towards "Gay Authors" or "nifty." So thank you. Good direction in Chapter 13. Excited to see and read about the new adventures in Billy's life during the remainder of the summer. Sex with Trace? Additional sex with Sam? A short fling with a curious Jamie? Rekindling of sex with Brandon eventually (and lots and lots of juicy anal details)? We can all hope! Please don’t take 2 weeks to add the next chapter… luv u ;-)

As always, keep those chapters coming!!!!! Always fun to see a new chapter added.

Wow, an impressive lengthy chapter and it was added less than a week after the previous chapter posting. Keep 'em coming!!! I look forward to the upcoming 'surprises' in Billy's summer life. I agree with the other 'chapter reviewer' in that you have invested a lot of time and energy to write over 360 Billy-chapters and we have followed you with diligence, interest, and care, and we form opinions -- and thus take time to write to you -- you indicate that you like to hear from us readers. As a skilled writer, you have taken us deep into Billy's psyche and his thought processes. He's grown, changed, and maybe matured (and... maybe not matured yet). I think I speak for many (of course not all) of your loyal readers in that we desire to see the serious permanent reuniting of Billy/Brandon for many reasons -- most importantly is the fact that neither can really think about anyone else for very long. The other periphery characters have been fun, diverse, and well-created. The world needs more stories with happy endings!!! And the inclusion of some hot descriptive anal sex is always welcome, sighhhh. Thanks, and keep it up. As always, I look forward to your next chapter.

Definitely headed in a great direction. Thanks for the chapter. Keep 'em coming.

BTW, thanks lacedaemon, for the support for the suggested appropriate direction of heading toward a rekindling of the serious relationship between Billy and Brandon at the eventual end of this series (and oh, gosh, let’s hear about some of their sex). I don't think that the 'Brandon' that was created in this series is hard, callus, unforgiving, unemotional, perfect, and insensitive, at least not from what I’ve read. And let’s be honest, these young gays are 14-15 years olds and are trying to ‘find’ themselves. They made mistakes and I hope I'm not held accountable for all of the mistakes I made in my teens. …And here is just an idea, perhaps, when the entire series is complete, it would be interesting to have a new set of books written from the perspective of Brandon.

You have a real talent for deeply developing your characters in a way that rings true to the 14-16 year-old mind-set. That is rare. Keep it up!!! However, if this set of chronicles does not end with Billy and Brandon seriously communicating their deep internal feelings and life-long love for one another, reconnecting and devoting themselves seriously to one another, and also containing some descriptive reciprocal anal sex especially with Billy sharing with Brandon the sensation of sitting on Billy's lap facing Billy’s face and pleasuring himself on Billy's hardness (of which you wrote about earlier when Billy mentioned that he needed to remember that intense ‘position’), it will be very, very disappointing. Anyone else agree? Keep writing! I look forward to future chapters.