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Hoping to see the next chapter soon :-)

I LOVE what you are doing with this story. Not one single discrepancy from the Billy Chase story that I have seen. Keep up the GREAT work!!!!!!!

Wow! New to this story this weekend and had to read thru to the end of Chapter 15. I was going to bemoan the fact that many of us do not read this to hear G-rated fiction or part-fiction. We have that on shelves at home. We want something sexy, human, masculine, gay, new, and earthy. Boy, you nailed it SO WELL at the end of this chapter. Please, please, please, in future chapters, keep the sexual details like you did at the end of this chapter. It was AWESOME! Adam is so easy to like. I do not hate Patrick. Hell, he is 18 and might not know yet—in denial. I look forward to future chapters. But PLEASE, keep all of the sexual details. Adam's first time bottoming was amazing writing!!!!!!!!!!

Well, 18 months ago, I had to stay home because of an injury. I somehow found the "Billy" story. I became fascinated and always looked forward to Thursdays for a new chapter. Please tell me that this is not the last chapter or book. Yes, it is not a 'secret story' like it was in the beginning. But there was hope that Billy was off to purchase a new book tomorrow, correct? We don't know what happens with Brandon and his father, we don't know what happens with Billy and his dad. We don't see what happens with Billy at school. Too many incredibly developed characters that we need to see through to a satisfying resolution. Comsie, you write so well. I hope to see BOOK 9.

Wow! I'll bet most of us did not see this coming! It was a great chapter on so many levels. It was lengthy! I hope that does not mean that you are going on a months-long break :-) Many of the early characters that were involved in the beginning are endearing. Nice to see a mention (JAMIE CROSS) from the early chapters; I hope for more. I just like them better than the mall store characters (my opinion only, sorry). If there's not some down and dirty sex scenes every once in a while, it loses some of the drama and action that was so amazing in the early books too; you write that so very well. Now we know for certain that Brandon is a willing 'bottom' or did we already presume that? Thanks for that!!!!!!!!!!! AND…there are so, so, so, so many ways that you can take the last chapter of Book 8. So exciting. I for one, want to see Billy and Brandon endure. I have a feeling that Billy's Mom is not dumb or unforgiving. It remains to be seen about Brandon's Dad. But all this doesn't mean there can't be major external issues that get dropped upon them, i.e., a return of AJ, dredging up of other old romances from both Billy and Brandon, and a host of other exciting possibilities (hopefully that involve sex) that I certainly have not even come close to imagining. All I know is that I'm looking forward to Chapter 50 and hopefully Book 9 and more SEX!!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!!

Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome!!! However, I may be alone on this matter, but once they finished their first kiss, more details would be fun, especially once they hit Billy's bed :-)

I love it when there is a new chapter every week; thanks Comsie. Hmmmm, Billy and Brandon and condoms? Looking forward to reading about that! And ... you are leaving us hanging with the Brandon/AJ issue. The story could escalate quickly if we find out that AJ scored with Brandon. Woohoo. Looking forward to more soon!!!! Keep those chapters coming.

It is always so very awesome to be greeted on Thursday's with a new "Billy" chapter. Keep 'em coming!

Thanks for the update. You write so well. I hope the 'action' is not complete now that Billy and Brandon are back to being good friends. I was rather getting excited when Billy was at work or maybe the food court and he sees AJ stalking/prowling and going after the hot stag Brandon. Would Brandon give in or would there be a major confrontation? Any more about Lee-sex aside from an online "hi?" Any new smut on Jamie Cross?

Good Lord! Is it possible that we could be back to adding a chapter weekly? I sure hope so! Two weeks between chapters is too long. Thanks for the new chapter. Still looking forward to the chapter when Billy finds out about Brandon's sexual adventure with the other Mall-boy? Was it AJ?

Good Lord! Is it possible that we could be back to adding a chapter weekly? I sure hope so! Two weeks between chapters is too long. Thanks for the new chapter. Still looking forward to the chapter when Billy finds out about Brandon's sexual adventure with the other Mall-boy? Was it AJ?

Holy smoke!!! I'll bet no one saw all of this coming! Is this the best chapter yet? (Well, it was a lengthy chapter, so that helps a lot.) I started reading on pins and needles wondering if I was going to want to keep scrolling down for fear of something bad happening or more of the same-old, same-old wishy-washy lack of commitments. But, Comsie, you didn't disappoint! MrM was spot-on with his review. I enjoyed reading that too. Yes, it is obvious that Billy and Brandon are 'ying and yang;' so meant for each other but the door is very-much left open for more drama, escapades, and revelations. MrM hit the nail on the head with the obviously trolling AJ scanning the Mall for hot-tickets (or like MrM states so well—the 16-point buck that Brandon is). Why wouldn't AJ? And Brandon would succumb, given his propensity for needing love—especially the type that AJ can appear to offer. Now, did AJ know about the Brandon/Billy relationship, if the 'mystery' other boy was AJ, after all? Oh, this brilliant AJ angle! Oh my, if details of that potential rendezvous scenario would get out...hmmmmm, exciting stuff. We know how AJ is no bottom. Brandon kept going back for more? Hmmmmm. Both Billy and Brandon can't both be tops, not very compatible, wouldn't you say? Thanks for the searing update and I'm already excited to see what more of the summer brings. SOOOOOOON!!!!!!!

Wow, wow, wow! I don't know what to think of this one. I am glad to see Jamie Cross and Sam back in the mix! Curious to see Brandon's explanation as to why he has been avoiding the phone calls and texts. Saturday at the Hill will be revealing and sculpt the remainder of the summer and the balance of this story unless it is wishy-washy. It's time for Brandon to shit or get off the pot and unveil himself as the real-deal (and an obvious target of the protagonist of the almost 400 chapters) or we -- and Billy -- need to move on to greener pastures. I'd hoped it was Brandon. But maybe he is a flake and a non-committal ninny. We shall see.... Won't we?

WooHooooooo! A great twist in a looooooong new chapter. I can't wait to hear what Brandon has to say.

Very nice chapter and I love it when they are only a week apart (or less), hint, hint. Lots of good material and forward motion. Now the ball is in Brandon's court, so to speak.