I really enjoyed this story because of it's wonderful writing style, the beautiful relationships (I particularly enjoyed the interaction of Jeff and Donnie for the simple fact that you don't often get two gay guys who aren't going out in one story, hehe), and the trippy dream scenes.
I have actually attempted Lucid Dreaming on occasion, with varying degrees of success. Com certainly did his homework when he said that you can remember more from lucid dream states than normal dreaming states; I can remember to this day the exact layout of the train station in which my first lucid dream happened. But anyway, I digress. However if anyone does want to chat about lucid dreaming some more then drop me an e-mail (infinity@outofreach.co.uk).
But Com, you have excelled yourself with this story, and I can't wait for another installment, especially with that cliffhanger. But you know, I had a sneeky suspicions from the first time we met Caleb that he was dead. IMHO Caleb lived in Donnie's house before he died - Donnie has only just moved in - and is able to harness Donnie's particular susepability to lucid dreaming to make Donnie a clairvoyant of sorts... But now I'm just talking shit, I'm just guessing.
Keep it up Com, Great work as usual
Love,
Infinity