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  1. skycrawler93

    Chapter 2

    Josh looked around the empty room as he slowly got up. He could hear a few faint noises coming from the other room in the house. He looked around the empty room, before he sighed softly. Slowly, he walked to the door, and open it slightly, trying to avoid any unnecessary attraction but failed when the door let out a thundering creaking sound. He winced a little, before he finally let his head out to peek outside the room, only to meet with Jake’s face in front of him. “Heyyo, sleepy head! Go
  2. skycrawler93

    Chapter 1

    Thank you so much for the review. I'm really glad that the beginning turns out okay. Thanks for pointing out about the amount of character. I will try my best to avoid having them all at once. Thanks again for your wonderful review~
  3. skycrawler93

    Chapter 1

    “He’s awake. Come on.” He heard a soft, a little squeaky kind of voice as he slowly opened his eyes. The light was blinding, and it took him a while before his eyes can adjust to it. He was startled when he saw a few boys gathering around him. “Hello, I am Jake. Who are you?” A bubbly, young looking boy asked. He just looked around, still trying to see where he was. He had to be somewhere; maybe a shelter or something, looking by how ugly the place is. But how did he arrive here? He couldn’t
  4. skycrawler93

    Prologue

    “Hey hey, look! A boy!” “Get him up. This isn’t a safe place.” “Jake, can you help me?” “Nate. Come here. Put the light on the path. We need to get out here fast.” “Rina! Come on! There’s no time! The diamonds can wait!” “Pickles. Move!” And everything became silent, and dark again.
  5. skycrawler93

    Withered

    This story follows a journey of a boy named Joshua who woke up in a strange place, where he met a bunch of teenagers around his age having some sort of super abilities. He had no memory of he did he ended up there and why. Little did he know, he is going to for an adventure full of twisted romance, betrayals and friendships.
  6. Hye. I just read your story, and this chapter really made me smile. It was sweet and romantic, and I love how you depict Kyle's situation into Prince Ladd's. It was nice comparing Hunter and Trace to Lee and Darrin. Although it was a difficult choice to make.
  7. “You know, when I was small, I always wanted to fly.” “So you want to be a pilot then?” “No, not that kind of flying. This might sound funny, but I want to fly on my own wings.” I chuckled lightly at his remarks, earning myself a light punch on my arms. “Don’t laugh. It’s not a joke.” He said, slightly pouting while he gazed through the stars. I stopped laughing, and followed his gaze to a certain direction in the sky, only to find a bright shining star blinking over the horizon.
  8. A story that involves love between two teens, and the incident that will change their life, forever.
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