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  1. JesseTolaria
    The last two chapter excellent done! The things are going further and the hopefully coming in public of all the things seen on the horizon. Thanks,. Well done!
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    Brotherhood

    JesseTolaria commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in Brotherhood

    I'm very interessted to know, how they take her normal life now and when they will show that they are twins or may be they get discovered. How will they it than? I would like if Ethan and Josh come together, soon.
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    It's a little bit irritating to read the same day twice. Even if this done from different point of views. That Cody could have overheard Ethan and Josh is a nice turn, but I miss the link to "Josh could have meet some one in the park" as Cody likes to interpet "Jacobs" absence in french lessons. I love the hints that Josh and Ethan could get closer. Ians seams to be suspect about "Jacobs" identity. The and is a cruel cliffhanger. You stole us the little talk before Jacob and Ethan fall asleep. Many thanks for the chap and I'm waiting for next
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    First I read the german version. Now I saw that the english one is some steps ahead I switched to this. The Story is nice and and I enjoy the absence of the sex thing, like other stories have and the slow going on (many stories have too much events and disasters in too short time) The switching of the twins is going to make the story complicate, because of the long duration. Maybe they should make a coming out at the parents of Joshua? Or Some one will discover the secrets? Let's see how let you going on the story :-) Sorry for my bad english, if it so :-) I'm german native, but this is an english forum .... Now I'm waiting for the next chapter. Hopefully not too long.
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