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What a great chapter Rob !!! I loved that Jed finally claimed Buzz and we got to see more of Christopher (he's so cute!). My only complaint is that this book feels way shorter than the first book . I kind of wish it was longer because I thought Derek and Shauna went away a little too easily and I still wanted to see Jed and Buzz grow their relationship. Hopefully, we'll get to see Zef and his mate and also Trey's love story. Thank you for this great book!
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Great chapter as always! The love between Noah and Eli is breathtaking and beautiful. Thanks for writing Rob!
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OMG!!! What an amazing chapter Rob! First, we get some closure with Christopher (Wylie) and he gets to stay with Parker and Colton. Shell finally goes into labor and Buzz, Christopher, and Rose join the pack and just wow what an action packed chapter in terms of how much happened. I'm so glad we got to see more of Christopher and how he is adjusting to the pack, but also that he's adopted by Parker and Colton AND how finally Colton proposes to Parker. Can't wait until the next chapter!!!
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Intense! Oh man first with the nightmare and the confrontation and the challenge between the Tahoe Pack and the Timber Pack. I was on the edge of my seat waiting with bated breath to see what happens. I totally saw Shauna and that enforcer Roy being together ever since that scene where Roy came out of the shower with tht soapy smell. And holy crap, who knew Derek knew about that affair? I definitely see Derek coming back for vengeance against the Timber Pack but we'll see. Great chapter Rob! It was filled with love, acceptance, and action. I loved how colton defended Buzz and said he would fight for him! It goes to show that Buss is officially a part of the pack and the Stone family. Can't wait till the next chapter.
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Honey our ukele sucks enormously. LAMPS
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This is a really interesting poem. There are a couple of interpretations of this poem (What I learned in my English classes are coming out with a vengeance) such as death, dementia, a break-up etc. The only critique is I thought there should a be a "but" before the line where one by one the memories perish because the line before talks about holding onto the memories. But still, great poem!
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How cute! I just finished reading this chapter and I love cats so it's adorable! But I'm a little confused about the old lady. Is she a witch that injured Seven/Sean or the master of the cats? And Prime and the others, are they past lives of Seven? But anyways, I thought the story was pretty cute, but I definitely would like to see more interaction between Sean and Ron though (that rhymes hehe).
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Sometimes I like to buy used clothes or jewelry because you can find some cool vintage things. Also, used textbooks if your professor allows it -__-/ textbooks can be so expensive...
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Darn it Rob! Jed was so close to marking Buzz and Buzz wanted it too! This was a beautiful scene and this just shows that Jed is just a big teddy bear (though he would preferred to be a big fluffy wolf ). Such a nice chapter to just focus on the development of Buzz and Jed's relationship without other people. I definitely want to see Zef and Miler's meeting and see more of Wylie with Colton and Parker, but I think this chapter was a nice change of pace. We finally get to see Buzz and Jed take their relationship up a notch and hopefully they won't wait too long before Jed claims Buzz so Derek and/or Shauna can butt in. Anyways, love the chapter Rob and can't wait until Saturday!!!
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This chapter is much more about settling back down to normalcy. We see Buzz and Jed at the Stone family house for dinner, Colton and Parker acting as surrogate parents to Wylie, and a possible foreshadowing of Derek and Shauna . But what's killing me is the small allusion to Miller and the constant wondering when Zef and Miller will finally meet and cause fireworks!! Nice chapter Rob! I'm dying for the next chapter (or you could just give us the whole book ).
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Awesome chapter!!! We got to see Buzz and Jed get intimate again which was hot . But it was also great to see the emotional scene between Martha and Buzz and how Stan finally finds his own niche within the pack. I hope Wylie will one be renamed to something less mean, but also that he readjust into the Timber Pack. Beautifully written Rob! And Zef is sensing that Alpha Poundstone is nearby… a new mating is going to happen soon!
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I've been a fan of your work since I read the Degan Incident last September. At first, I thought the Timber Pack premise wasn't going to be my cup of tea since it has teenage lycans (and that theme has been overdone ALOT), but you've made it fresh and exciting again! With Chapter 10 of Enforcer, we've been introduced to another possible sequel of Alpha Miller with Zef which should be interesting since the Alpha is in his 30s(?) while Zef is 17/18. I can't wait to see how you work it outs
