Max03

Happy birthday Jack I think it is on your profile... That's where I saw it

Okay, first post on this forum. Great story CJ, you really are a talented writer, I love your story. It isn't just another lame porn story like million others on the internet. It really has a storyline and that's great. The latest chapter was very well written and has lot of emotions in it, but I like to know what happens to Eric ... I'm eager to see the next chapter, keep up the good work. Max

Hi Jack and everyone else I just read your entire story Jack and I think it is amazing ... You are a wonderfull writer, you describe the surroundings and the feelings of the people so well. I don't read the story but I live the story. I really like the french parts in the story. French is my second languages and it is nice to see both languages, English and French, combined in one story. The storyline is very good and I just love Ben, don't ask me why but I love that boy. Also I think Ben's little brother is a very good character in the story, the younger brother who looks up to his older brother. I found your story just recently by accident. I read on another forum someone who said So I wanted to check it for myself so I read his story and I don't see a cold-hearted person. I see a warm-loving person through the characters is the story . Keep up the good work Jack Sorry for my bad english, it is my third languages Max

I have been right here waiting for you... Okay I did a few other things too but I read your latest chapter. I think it is a very good chapter and I have a feeling that Jeff has feelings for John, maybe it is just a strong friendship but I hope that Jeff does have 'love' feelings for John. Jeff is so caring. I also like Kevin, you just have to love the little boy. Keep up the good work Tom and again "I'll be right here waiting for you and the next chapter" Max

This chapter is a strange chapter It is enlarging my questions instead of giving answers and I LIKE IT I like the story very much and I still like the brother love... I completely understand the mothers reactions, it is in a mother to protect her children whatever it costs. I think if you try to steal a young lion from his mother, the mother would do much worser things then john's mother has done... Good work Tom and Kurt and Tom take all the time you need ... (I'll be waiting right here for you and the next chapter...) Yours Max

What's happening? It is kinda quiet here ... Where's Tom and when will the next chapter be published? Greets Max

I finally found time to come congratulate Tom and Kurt for their amazing work on the story

I'm shocked... I really did like Connor and Ryan , now I only like Ryan . Whatever reason it is I don't think Connor should judge before getting the full story. Ryan has issues, I know, and he is acting like an ass but if Connor is in love with Ryan it isn't a good reaction to give. I think Ryan still really loves Connor, it was obvious that he was jealous. Now it isn't Ryan anymore who is going crazy, it is connor and I hope he comes back to earth really soon. And he should really do something not to loose his temper... If he keeps doing this I'm certain Maggie won't let him stay. How much she loves Connor, if he can't control himself and kicks in a door he is a danger to himself and to others. I agree he has a bad past but a lot of people have a bad past but it isn't a right to act like that. I also hope that Ryan can forgive Connor. I'm a person that believes in true love that will last a life time. Last week I thought Connor deserved better than Ryan now I certain that Connor doesn't deserve Ryan, and Ryan certainly deserves better then Connor. For christ sake if a mother says to you that a person is dating another, mothers aren't really the best source for this information, I don't think many people will go tell mommie their love life. Sorry for the chaotic text and the mistakes (Kitty is free to change it if she is going in shock because I don't want the world to loose such a good editor.) Keep up the good work LBTW you really did make my heart go crazy and normally I quite a down to earth person who isn't touched easy... LBTW - Kitty

Or a get toghether of Ryan and Connor... I just love Ryan ...

Outstanding story I just hope Conner and Ryan will talk and get things solved before the real problems get in. I'm not a very good commenter so I don't comment much LB is one of the best authors in the world and Kitty is just the best editor .... Max

Jipieeeeeeeeee Maybe we could blackmail Kitty to work even harder no no just kidding I really like the chapter, I can't wait to read the next chapter, ... I really like the relationship of Connor and Ryan but I also like the kindness and sensitiveness of Ryan. Keep up the good work Max

OH noo, don't let Connor and Ryan break up. They are such a wonderfull couple. I really liked the chapter. The closeness between ryan and connor but also the love between Ryan and his brother Toby. The story is really touching Can't wait to see the next chapter... Max