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    Very interesting narrative turns and an original perspective on the father character. I did expect/hope the son to lash out jus a bit at his father, who seemed to have chosen self-righteousness to deal with his disappointment (or failure as a father, as you said to DDK). Coming out is never easy as a teen, however open and caring your parent(s) are - the correlation is tenuous at best. What does he have to hide in his bedroom that he made such sacred territory? ; ) Well done.
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    Thanks Gene, and I'm happy that you "hated some things"... The story is indeed all about ambivalence and was designed to stir up conflicting emotions.
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    Thanks ! For what it's worth, this is a self-contained story, that is, there's only one "chapter". I look forward to hearing back from you guys.
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    Hi everyone - I've written a few stories before, but I took the next step and published on GA. There is a vibrant community out here and I hoped I could benefit from your insights, reactions, comments, and suggestions. Let me know what you think - Thanks to all - Ben [sharedmedia=stories:stories:4259]
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