Ben Highlander
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I'm loving it. Nicely done. Looking forward to more. In spite of the sketchy description of the environment there's enough to create and atmosphere. Thanks for writing.
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I gotta dit I would have written an orgy. I have to agree with Miles: I think that offering sex experiments could have been a mistake.
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This was a lovely chapter. The sex was great, the nice bonus that Brad was tender, and I see the point of it being with somebody else. After all, he's learning to eat his comfort cold and learning valuable lessons as he reviews his past. I'm proud of him for the way he's developing.
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Dance Floor Revelations
Ben Highlander commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Dance Floor Revelations
Still loving it. This is every gay man's fantasy, I guess, and you're doing it well. Still a little short on the chapters. Can't you publish 2 as one next time round? Barely what's the appetite lol -
I loved that
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I like how you think. Thanks for educating me. I'm learning a lot.
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Thanks. That was a welcome relief. I'm so glad he's learning something about himself. And you've managed to ease my pained heart. No kidding
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This has been too hard. It is breaking my heart to read this story but I carry on, hoping for some kind of redemption. It could not have been easy writing this. I will persevere.
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This is just too painful
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I have to say I was disappointed with the sex scene, sorry. I felt like it was mechanical and flat. There, I said it. But now, in light of what's happening here with all the self-recriminations, I'm interested to see whether this was all a part of the master-plan. I enjoy what you're doing with stereotypes. You're still a freaking good writer.
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It is inexorable, isn't it? You can avoid commitment but you can't avoid inclination.
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The Ugly Green Monster
Ben Highlander commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in The Ugly Green Monster
The whole straight guy falls in love with a man is almost my favourite theme, if not my favourite. Loving this. -
This was so hottttt
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I can feel my mind and heart soaking up the nourishment your deft writing provides... Thanks!
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I love writing. It is so incredibly important when done right. It calls out to our deep places. You make me happy cos you write well
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You have something few writers here have and I'm enjoying it. : Rhythm and timing,. I think you know what I mean.
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This is exhausting but in a good way. Bring it on.
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"Then he had to show up and disturb my predictable, happy life with his catastrophic, incendiary beauty." This is inflammatory stuff and should come with a health warning. But I WANT to feel this sickness. Good stuff, this.
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What a story so far! I get it all. Been there. AM there. Loving it. Writing my own version of this story as we speak. "Rivers of a living waters". Only hope mine ends up being so good. A lot more words and different style. But yours is racy and pity. Enjoy your style. Ben H
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Where The Hell Are We?
Ben Highlander commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Where The Hell Are We?
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mmm. This is a great story. C'mon check 3!
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"After I'm Done, I'm Gonna Be a Dead Man. Deal?"
Ben Highlander commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in "After I'm Done, I'm Gonna Be a Dead Man. Deal?"
I like what I see so far... Sad about the boys... Life socks if you're a mobster. Shit Bring it on! -
I love the story. My only criticism is that chapters are too short
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thanks for writing this story. I'm loving your terse style, and looking forward to what happens. I will follow this story. Perhaps you wanna check out my clone sagas story? Ben H
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The Bachelor Farmer
Ben Highlander commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in The Bachelor Farmer
Cole, I'm really appreciating your subtlety and story telling ability. It is really important to hear the affirming stories of clergy who hear the heart of God's love and not the meanness of man's small mindedness. You rock!
