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Burn Permits Not Included
AquariusGuy commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Burn Permits Not Included
His car nearly bit the dust and it wasn't going to Little B or Noah... any guesses? Could be a plane crash too... or something else -
Burn Permits Not Included
AquariusGuy commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Burn Permits Not Included
There were things Jack knew but something he did unbeknownst to all it stopped everything. Of course Little B didn't touch anything 😉 There was a point in the story where you could tell that Grandma was done.... She used Little B's given name. -
Burn Permits Not Included
AquariusGuy commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Burn Permits Not Included
So many possibilities. -
Burn Permits Not Included
AquariusGuy commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Burn Permits Not Included
That almost happened but something will happen. -
Burn Permits Not Included
AquariusGuy commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Burn Permits Not Included
Little B is one of my favorites. Chase is in the Military and he knows that can have put strains on relationships. Parker is definitely a douche and there will be a point where he gets humbled. I have been working how that scene will play out. Tristan was captured to prevent him from blowing the lid off Jack's plan. -
Burn Permits Not Included
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Something eventually will. -
Burn Permits Not Included
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he's triple P the IV to you The guy from the Fire Investigators knew who PPP was and he was comfortable to make the joke. Now that I think about it he should have just been PP or is the Pee Pee?? -
Burn Permits Not Included
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Grandma and Uncle Matt appeared in Uncle Nathan’s driveway just as the fire department was dousing the smoldering remains of Parker's sports car. Uncle Nathan was completely livid, pacing the pavement and screaming at Uncle Matt about letting an "uncontrollable child" run wild. Little B hid behind my legs, clutching my jeans. When I glanced down, the kid had a ridiculously satisfied smirk plastered across his face. Across the driveway, Shiloh, his brothers, and Parker sto
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Yep, that anger is going to be around for a bit. Someone steps in to set things straight with Shiloh. When I was little and heard about a serial killer, I was like why would someone kill cereal?
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Axe body for tools by tools. I can’t stand that smell. Little B isn’t done yet…
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It’s a very rare treat indeed
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Among other things
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“What are you doing here?” Shiloh asked, looking completely confused. Behind me, I could hear Little B letting out a quiet, mischievous snicker. That kid. “Where is Damian?” I asked, my eyes darting around the space. I hadn’t been over to Uncle Nathan’s in a while, and he had clearly made a few renovations to the floor plan. Uncle Nathan suddenly stepped into the hallway. “Noah? What are you doing here?” “Where is Damian?” I repeated firmly.
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We will learn about Jack’s calling card and why he’s the gold rapist. Damian did not steal the chain. Sometimes people make dumb mistakes and this was one. To go further no one outside the family knows Jack is dead. He is still missing and some corruption will be exposed.
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He sure did.
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I walked into the living room, completely unsure of what to expect next. Grandma sat on the sofa right next to Lucky. I took a seat in one of the plush armchairs and noticed Little B was back at the island counter, pencil in hand, drawing furiously. “Noah, this is not going to be easy for you to hear,” Grandma said sincerely, turning to look at Grandpa. “You can sit down, honey.” Grandpa nodded heavily, taking the armchair opposite mine. “I was about three years old,” Lucky b
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It’s a rather large tree but I’ve slimed down the active characters as the story moves on.
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Yes, Jack was a sick fuck BUT he has more coming. Yes, Noah life is going to be complicated and it gets more complicated. When he see SHILOH....
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Noah will not run back to anyone. Chase will be around for a while....
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Don't forget the concrete
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Hi cousins were blackmailed and things are not going to snap back to everyone being friendly. It's a hell of deceit but Noah is a decent guy and eventually they come to some kind of relationship.
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It was Silas.... He looks like Shiloh but isn't. He will get help but don't forget his brother doesn't know he spilled the beans.
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In a sense yes, but not how you think. Does that make sense? Probably not... but if I say more
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I was trying to come up with something catchy
