KingsFan28

wow! absolutely fabulous

Again absolutely fantastic! Of all the ways i have imagined Justin telling Tayrn and the rest of the group (Yes some of us do dream about GDF, especially when you leave us with those cliffhangers :wacko: ) that was not one of them, yet was better than any i could have come up with. Keep up the great work! Sunday is only 6 days away now!!!!

Wow, just finished it and once again im not quite sure exactly what to say. Once again your remarkable writing skill has left me without any way to describe just how good it is. Looking forward to next sunday already! A+ . I'll send ya a pm with a better review when i can find the words to do it justice.

OMG you did it again!!!!! Your cliffhangers are gonna be the end of me :wacko: . At least this time i only need to wait half a week . Don't worry about being busy and only getting one in. We all know what thats like . One great chapter is always better than two rushed, possibly watered down ones. Keep up the great work!

Great new episodes! As mike said your really great at cliffhangers, im already dieing for next sunday to get here again. Glad to see Cody/Lion finally together Poor Oliver, hate when that happens lol . Keep up the great work! Also thanks for adding height/wieght to the character page .

eeeek, what was i thinking when i wrote that. Definantly dont reveal hobbies or anything else you have planned/think you will have later in the story ( ex: Oliver likes Skateboarding). Was mainly thinking along the lines of physical attributes/build. Having pictures of the faces is helpful because that gives eye/hair color. However when you introduce your characters in the episodes nothing is mentioned about height/wieght. In this case, i feel these characterists are important. It would make a win more impressive if say a smaller character beats a larger/stronger character. In this case, when in doubt, dont add it to the character page is probably better On another note, did you modify the first episode since you posted it? I seem to remember it starting with Cody on the plane coming over, but it started with him being late to practice when i looked (went back to double check to see if i missed height/weight). Of course i could just be mistaken, once i get addicted to a story i tend to replay it many times over in my head and sometimes imagine things that arn't there Thanks for taking the time to read/respond to the suggestions . Keep up the great work! Only 6 days left till sunday!

all my favorites except lion are losing . Great Chapters again. Looking forward to both the Lion/Cody and Oliver/Michel relationships. First couple chapters had a bit too much diva action for my taste (perhaps thats just because im biased ) Looking forward to the future chapters. Also just a suggestion, but you could add small character profiles on the characters page (height/weight/hometown/hobbies/ect.) just to give readers allitle background information on the characters. Ugh, Next Sunday is a whole 7 days away! ::addicted:: ps- Yes i know my spelling, grammer, and sentence structure sucks. Thats why yall are the writers and im just here to it all and you.

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