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I was amazed at how cool it was. When I looked up all I could see were branches with apples and leaves. The light broke through in spots, but the air was cool. “Come, I’ll show you our swimming pond.” I followed Carl out of the apple orchard and then the heat really hit me. “Come on. The pond will cool you.” After saying that, he took off his clothes and jumped into the pond. “Come on” “I can’t swim” “Stand where I am, you feel the cold water.” So I undressed and sl
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Thanks. I needed a break after ARROW.
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The next thing I knew, my door was opened and I was pulled from the car. There was this kid with a big grin on his face. “My name is Carl what’s yours” I spurted out, “David” A big woman came and Mom was in a hug. There were tears, I guess not seeing each other for several years renewed old feelings. I didn’t have much time to take a look around, Carl had my suitcase and pulled me toward the house. “This is my bedroom and you’ll be sleeping here.” Dad came in and handed
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You are very perceptive
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Yes. You will find this as a new story type. After Arrow, I needed a change.
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I hope you enjoy it. It is a different story
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yes, a little different from my previous story
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His grandparents had passed on. The distance between where he lived and where his grandparents lived was like the West Coast versus the East Coast.
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Mom wanted a leisure drive, Dad wanted to get there. Two different objectives and no consensus. Want to bet Dad returns home alone
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I believe that when two people have two agents, there will be problems.
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It should have been a little obvious that road trips with family were tolerated by many people, including me. I hope you had a happy holiday and may the New Year bring you prosperity and good health.
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Thanks and a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year/ The dynamics in the McLavic family. When Mary Lou was born, Mom was very happy. But when David was born, Dad had his son but Mom wasn't satisfied and that was when Brth Ann was born. Dad said no more. He was afraid he would have ended up with more girls. So the factory was shut down. Dad made sure no other children would be born.
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When Mary Lou graduated from high school, Mom decided she wanted to see her sister who lived in Pennsylvania. Dad said Mom wanted to enroll Mary Lou in the University of Pennsylvania School of Nursing, her alma mater. Dad got the car serviced, Uncle Joe would take care of the house while we were gone. Early Monday morning, Mom woke us at 6 in the morning. We had packed the night before. Beth Ann ended up packing twice, Mom had to check everything, and Dad had a rack on the top of the c
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The time of this story is the 20th century. The initial chapters were designed more for backup. Uncle Joe's great grandfather was involved in the construction of the original home which was expanded into the University when the two miners died. Original construction started during the end of the gold rush.
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His older sister is very close to her mother whereas David is close to his father and Uncle Joe
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Young David is my response to ARROW. I needed a break so Meet young David.
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A young man influenced by an Indian friend takes a journey. The story is based on the people he meets and a life decision that he makes.
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My name is David C. McLavic and this is my story. I was born at the medical facilities of North West University. My father is the head of the archeology department and my mother is the Head Nurse at the University’s medical facilities. I have an older sister and a younger sister. My father was an Associate Professor of Archeology at Pennsylvania State University where he met my mother who was studying to be a nurse. They dated and when Dad was offered the position at North West they g
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My name is David C. McLavic and this is my story. I was born at the medical facilities of North West University. My father is the head of the archeology department and my mother is the Head Nurse at the University’s medical facilities. I have an older sister and a younger sister. My father was an Associate Professor of Archeology at Pennsylvania State University where he met my mother who was studying to be a nurse. They dated and when Dad was offered the position at North West they g
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A great synopsis
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That pain was real as I ended my creation. For the moment, I stepped into Armand's shoes.
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Growing up the term 'storytelling' had a different connotation. But I am proud that you have used that phrase in support of my stories. Thank you
