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I thought this was nice reconciliatory, feel good, enjoyable chapter other than Jack the confused of course! I again feel that JJ could settle down if Mark let's him! Kris has a strong character and should help in this. Can't wait for the next!!
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Wow! That was an unexpected but interesting spin off. The next few chapters could be interesting & exciting as anything could happen. Thanks Mark! The master storyteller. Don't keep us hanging for too long.
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Wow! One's willi to eat the humble pie n the doesn't realise that he needs to. What about the reaction of Jack's own family?? I guess people want to bake the cake & eat it to. Brad did a good job with him. Kris has a strong character. He knows how to handle JJ & JJ's good fortune. There's hope for JJ. Mark, That was a nice chapter n can't wait for the next. But what about the so many other chapters in the series?? Will is going to Boston so there may be some update.
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Don't do that! Do you want to be stranded without updates???????
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You've Mark a lot to ponder upon. But then, this should keep him going for quite some time.
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Boot Camp! JJ would through tantrums and be thrown out! Unless they were used to handling spoilt super rich. He's annoying me now.
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He just needs a good ole spanking. I thought he had changed but Mark proves me wrong.
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Congrats Gary.
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St. Vincent and the Letter
vinkarama commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in St. Vincent and the Letter
Aah! The famous Mark Arbour cliff hanger! I'd love to have a peek into his brain. I'm lovin it! George is at war without a war. St. Vincent has a lot to think about & tread carefully. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.- 44 comments
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Will is continuing to show maturity I feel. He's extracted a commitment to handle JJ with care. JJ will hopefully get over his bumps now. Thanks Mark! Await the next chapter.
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The elder's visit with JJ and not creating a scene should be a major confidence booster for him! Kris may shit in his pants on meeting them as he may be overawed but the elders will stand by JJ and accept him. Will n Travis's relationship seems to be working. A great chapter.
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Understood! Imay be a little frank in my posts, but I don't mean to offend you. ❤️
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A bit dark, but nonetheless a healing chapter. The challenge will be from the fact that both are successful captains; how much time they get together needs to be seen. Thanks Mark.
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What about the Princess??
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"That was a massive oath from him. “That’s good enough for me,” I said. That was our cue to fuck," Wow! JJ seems to be feeling secure for the first time. This could actually be enjoyable and a relief to the family. Will is just Will! A great chapter! Thanks!
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Aaahh! Mark's back from a cruise. Gives us a double whammy. I foresee Mark's devious mind giving Granger the captaincy of the Endymion. What says you all!! How George gets it will be interesting as he just loves the ship. Thanks Mark, for a wonderful chapter once again.
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A wonderful chapter! The contrast between the two series is so vast that I don't envy the effort you have to put in to their authoring. Admire you Mark! God bless!
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There's nothing more to be said!🥺
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Oh! The excitement! I'm loving it! Many thanks Mark.
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Mark, Just feel the excitement in the feedback above! I hope this will be another looong story. While GAP is as exciting, the series has many characters. The family itsself is large. Here, the numbers are less with all revolving around George. Others are introduced according to requirement. Just pointing out the difference. Lastly, just keep writing forall of us.
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I had somehow missed the postings of this new story & have I lost out. Many thanks Mark for continuing of the series. I would be careful of Caroline! Could it be that she is regrouping??
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Prince von Schullenberg
vinkarama commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Prince von Schullenberg
I somehow feel that JJ wants respect from the family due to his achievements. He was robbed of this in his ice skating but with a good relationship which helps him with stability, he will shine. He needs a good boost on his confidence. I wish this for him. -
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Mark, Cliff hangers are getting to be synonymous with a Mark Arbour chapter! A very nice close to 2023! Have great 2024! Keep healthy! Be happy! As also to all! But do keep us entertained.
