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Chapter 16 - I wanna learn with you
Luiz commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 16 - I wanna learn with you
True that's what I said BUT I'll let you know why his tomorrow has to wait...It's just that I gotta update Peter's point of view about it lol and make the other story move on too I thought..still do...writing both points of view is cool but it's more hard work than I thought! It gives me more work to move on with the plot. I hope everybody enjoys! -
December, 24th, 2008, Wednesday So, it was a gloomy December 24th as it was the second Christmas without mom. I mean, last time, for us not to be alone, dad and I went to my aunt’s house to spend the Christmas Eve, but as it was all recent at the time, dad was far from his best cheering mood, and I wasn’t much better. The atmosphere got so ‘thick’ that day, we didn’t even show up for the Christmas lunch. This year, I guess due to those previous events, we weren’t invited, or dad just d
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December, 20th, 2008, Saturday. So, yesterday, was the coolest day ever… well, maybe not ever… as Peter kinda wanted rushing to get out of here when I got hot and he was all over me *ahem* but it was kind of cool, because he said goodbye for me phoserly, I mean, he held my hand by the door… *sigh* I guess I just wanna cry right now… I mean he’s straight and even knowing I have zero chance… I mean… if he told me to kneel in front of him just to mess with me, I would gladly do it… even i
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Hey, thanks =D Hope you enjoy
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It's nice to know that this story can walk alone without the other to fill the gaps... and that lol Peter can be mildly convincing he's straight from Chris' point of view
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December, 19th, 2008, Friday. Apricots, shrimp chips, blackberry jelly, chocolate cake, mmm… cherries, ah, soda, I’ll take two… no, three… juice cartons, here, check on the list…mmm… what else, coconut drops, peaches, does he like it… I hope so… cream cheese, the big one, that’s it… School was officially over for winter break but that was me, on the supermarket… This afternoon, I saw Peter at school and he was all by himself… I guess Nick’s family must’ve hit the road as it’s upco
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Hi, Yeah, it's been a while. When i was a teenager (btw I'm currently 30) I started reading this kind of story and it really helped me and I grew fond of it. It took a few years but now I have a boyfriend so things got hectic to keep on writing. Yup, the story isn't finished. I intend on writing more... just don't know when. Please feel free to read others of mine and also.. as little as I can reply but... feel free to write. Hugs, Luiz
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Hi, Yeah, it's been a while. When i was a teenager (btw I'm currently 30) I started reading this kind of story and it really helped me and I grew fond of it. It took a few years but now I have a boyfriend so things got hectic to keep on writing. Yup, the story isn't finished. I intend on writing more... just don't know when. Please feel free to read others of mine and also.. as little as I can reply but... feel free to write. Hugs, Luiz
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December 18th, 2008 “I can’t believe tomorrow is already the last day before winter break.” I was saying as I was having a bite of my sandwich. “Yeah, it’s so cool this time of the year, you know, traveling, family gatherings, lots of pictures…” Nick was saying. “…lots of food…” I complemented and we both giggled. We were having ‘our last lunch’ of the year, as Nick won’t come to school tomorrow, on our last school day, because his dad decided to hit the road tomorrow mor
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December 15th, 2008, Monday So, I got some advice from Mr. Thompson, and a tight hug in those strong arms… sigh… but I guess the best advice I got was from Mrs. Jenkins. You see, she doesn’t even know me, I saw her like four times in my life and she was the best! So, I decided that this is it, I should tell Peter how I feel about him… I mean, he’s so sexy and masculine, but what… what if there’s a small chance that he’s gay and even the slightest chance that he likes me back… I’ll
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Well, as you're following 'real time'... I was writing the next chapter as you finished reading it in here... you can check next chapter ; ) I'm internally laughing now as you were 'Chris hater number 1' and now is cheering for him! LOL I feel kinda proud of myself to cause such feelings in a few faithful readers. Cool! But, actually, I don't think Chris will be that sad like you said, will he? Love conquers all doesn't it?! Hugs and good night!
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December 17th, 2008, Wednesday It was already Wednesday, and as I already told you, I have almost all of my classes along with Chris… pestering Chris, annoying Chris… that lately turned into er… one of my best friends… so cute and charming when he wants to be, with that silk straight hair, eyes green like the sea on a cloudy day and sigh… lately he suddenly turned into a declined crush of mine! And, damn it, he didn’t show up to classes yesterday nor today… and I don’t even know if h
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December 15th, 2008, Monday “Last school week, u-hul!” I was cheering as Nick and I were walking to my place, so we could ‘celebrate it, too’… you know, being horny teenagers, Nick is so addictive, his skin, his hair, his eyes, his perfect gaze, his perfect hair, his calmness, being enthusiastic at the same time, his sexy long legs, his sexy plain torso, his lips, not big, not thin, just right, and sooo kissable… We stopped at the bakery because Nick wanted to try this new sandwich t
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Chapter 12 - So, what do I do?
Luiz commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 12 - So, what do I do?
Hey what about Nick? Aren't u cheering for Nick?! I'm kiddin lol..im so glad u think like that..i hope the guys who dont comment think the same..thats the intention of feeling to cause: D But I do have a solution in mind...it mau be a long one and kinda very complicated; ) Smooches from southern summer! -
So perceptive... currently my preferred 'commenter' that put that I'm not 'cool writer' and I don't have many comments going on lol... though I had other writing attempts already... I guess most of what you commented is kinda claryfing... so check next chapter ; ) Hugs!
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Always open for happy ending suggestions... or suggestions in general ; ) Hugs!
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Hey, I missed your comments. And 'whoa' I'm glad i could 'convince' you that Chris is a good guy... because in first place i didn't know if you'd read this one... the first thing I remembered when I saw your comment here was you commenting right on first chapter that you didn't like Chris ... Actually, i don't know if I've already said that, but the characters kinda 'have a life of their own' (I'm not crazy... at least not much lol... what I mean is sometimes I start writing with a purpouse and sometimes it ends up leading to something completely different giggle)... that put I'm glad Chris, himself, could convince you he's a good guy... Mmmmm... a happy ending here is getting difficult don't you think.. he's sad a lot lately! What do you guys think could be a happy ending?!
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December, 14th, 2008, Sunday That morning, dad realized he should see me and eventually talk to me… you know, like fathers do. I guess he had something to cheer up his mood… “So, what about school?” he asked as we were eating breakfast. “Ah, everything is fine. I just finished my science project with my new friend, Peter.” I replied – yeah, the one who punched me, your office manager’s kid… but dad didn’t even realize I got hit, my nose got bruised for a week… sigh… I really ba
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December, 13th, 2008, Saturday That morning, I woke up especially early, even being a Saturday and took a look at the mirror. “That’s you, Chris…” I was thinking to myself, cooper color hair – if it exists *giggle* - very straight, falling some in my eyes, green eyes, very green, never asked for them, but they remind of mom, we’ve always had the same green eyes, I like my nose too… I wish I was hunk like Trevor, or hot blond hunk like Bruce or… sigh… but that’s me… not that I’m not ‘
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Chapter 21 - I'm deeply in love
Luiz commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 21 - I'm deeply in love
Hey ur an accurate reader of mine now..just posted the charter. I should post other stories of mine. I really look forward to chat with u. Drop me a note at muito e-mail if u feel like qualideucoloco@yahoo.com.br Hugs if I may 😉 -
December 13th, 2008, Saturday Yesterday, as Nick had already had a shower at home, and we were watching TV, in no time – as it always happens …sigh – his dad was home to pick him up and he was gone again. Gee, I miss him so much and now it’s Saturday morning and I woke up so late, geez… in a minute it’ll be lunchtime. I guess that’s what happens when I’ve been so close to Nick every day, every weekend and he was so available, and addictive, and our passion… well, it’s all been
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Chapter 3 - Pop but not so cool
Luiz commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Pop but not so cool
There are Peter, Nick and Chris. In my other stories they are all lovely but here i decided to create a conplex character...because its all about not judging you know..sometimes we judge but dont stop to think why one's like that..and yeah i could hug him now right giggle* -
Chapter 20 - Don't I always make it up to you?!
Luiz commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Don't I always make it up to you?!
Yeah i've always been a huge fan of the 'tentativeness' of getting to know each other on stories after all first u gotta admit ur gay and THEN u gotta be sure u aint gonna be punched and then start from where straight guys start giggle Thanks 4ur positive comment love'em Hugs! -
Hey it seems someone is tentative to speak Portuguese lol. Thaanks for the kind words. Sure more than I deserve. O should be writing next chap but i'm tired... Looking forward to listen more from you...it seems you ..so friendly Hugs if I may
