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November, 25th, 2008 Next morning, as a gift, Nick was by my door. As he did the same yesterday, I didn’t want to leave him waiting outside and in a ‘let me see his reaction’ idea, I was still wrapped in my towel, with wet hair and went by the living room’s window and bingo, there he was, by the sidewalk tree, so I opened the door. “Hey, Nick, come on in.” I said with a smile and a wink holding the door open with one hand, and the other hand on my waist, for the towel not to drop. He just put
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Hi. Im at the gym with the olympics athmosphere around Its Hard not to giggle.. Hey mean idea one get tempted in the team and the other not makin it... Im not gonna do that but we can have some related Hot trouble right?!
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Hi... one of if not my best supporter with this tale! Thanks hehe Feel free to drop me a note whenever you feel like. Smooch Luiz
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Thanks for your usual kindness and feel free to drop me a note whenever you fell like.. love'em =D Smooch
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November, 24th, 2008. Well, last night I couldn’t help call Nick again, to listen to his voice, his breathing through the phone you know, even that could be sexy and sweet about him... when I mention sweet things about him, I can’t help recalling something sweet that comes out of him when I motivate him right *blush* Anyways, this morning, there was classes again, but I couldn’t wait to see him again. I got dressed in a pair of faded jeans, red t-shirt, for an usual warm day. But I didn’t ha
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November, 22nd, 2008 Last night, it was a blast, it was fireworks! I would never expect Nick to tell that he liked ol’silly *me*. I still tear up a little when I remember his courage and the fear in his eyes… of losing me… but thinking back, I was the only one that had so much to lose… and well, of course, remembering about last night other than making my eyes wet make me start feeling wet… down there *blush* But the start was so fast, last night… all that energy stored up, all that insecurity
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Chapter 11 - Thank God Friday
Luiz commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Thank God Friday
Hey, Thanks for The kindness. I cant be a spoiler But nothing real bad Should happen. I guess i dont have the courage. They are made to be sweet! The problem That's about to happen u guess is Just the excess of love! *gee seein it on the mobile and mine 'cant speak english' horrible to type Anyway Thanks and next chapter upcoming! -
Chapter 11 - Thank God Friday
Luiz commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Thank God Friday
Hi... you know you're getting me spoiled... always when I post a chapter I already look forward for your feedback... as you're 'suspicious'... you always say good things lol Thanks... I hope I didn't let you and the other guys down about how it turned out... MAYBE I did as no one else said er... pretty much anything else : P Now, they resolved the main issue (after many chapter before you all gave up on the story lol) let's cause some trouble, shall we? HUGS! -
November, 21st, 2008. Last night, I got mom to let Nick sleep over, can you believe it?! She was actually cool about it, so I called him to let him know, so he got authorization from his mom too. I told him he could stay over, so in order not to waste any time, he should bring to school, along with the usual stuff, ‘his stuff’, like toothbrush, another set of clothes. I was getting out of the shower before choosing a set of clothes, to go to school. The phone rang, unusually early in the morni
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November, 20th, 2008. Right after unusual sleepy first period, it seems the teacher was sick, so that, the class was cancelled and we had a ‘free class’. We socialized a little but as the subject got all dull and boring we ended up sitting on the grass, despite it was not lunch time… it was turning into kind of ‘our school spot’ it seems… “I know I should feel sorry for the teacher, but it’s actually cool we get some free time, you see, it’s something between waking up, zoning out during firs
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November, 18th, 2008. Yesterday, Nick didn’t have to leave in a hurry… I mean, he would come over but then he ended up changing his mind. I wanted to call him to know if everything was ok, but I’m sure he had his chores and stuff and I didn’t want to pester him, so, no, I didn’t call him. That day, as we were in class and the teacher was talking, do you know that moment in which you slept enough but it seems you didn’t just because you’re a teen and the teacher’s voice sounds like a lullaby an
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Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
Luiz commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
I just logged to submitted chapter 9 for approval and found, as usual, your kind message, probably far kinder than I deserve. So, chapter 9 is posted! Now it's very late here, I gotta go to bed. Sweet dreams, everybody! Good night! -
Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
Luiz commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
Hey, it's really cool seeing this anticipation of yours.. I guess this is kind of thing that is motivating me to make the story move forward kind of fast. Cheers! -
Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
Luiz commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
Hi. First of all thanks for your kindness. Maybe it's exactly your kindness that doesn't let you see much of my foreigner mispellings lol Actually, I've never been out of my country but this skill of mine sure helped paying the rent throughout college. I started writing when I was a teenager then I stopped for a while, there was a girlfriend, a fiancée on the way... and now I'm back writing... but now I finished college I guess I'm not a teenager anymore. About your first love, I'm sure your memories have nothing to do with you being old or not, after all, when I find my first true love I'm sure I'll remember even in my next life..with my heart. Maybe you don't remember like that because it hasn't happened yet and is just waiting for you Now let's start writing chapter nine. -
Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
Luiz commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
Hi. Thanks. After an hectic day at work this is something nice to hear (read). And about the guys... what IF they don't like each other?! Kiddin... let's see about that love confession lol Thanks again for your kindness. -
November, 17th, 2008, Monday. No need to say I went to bed thinking of Nick and woke up thinking of Nick. So that, as I woke up, before the alarm, I turned it off, closed my eyes and I just knew I wouldn’t drift off because my dick was, actually, aching, rock hard. I slowly caressed it through the mattress – it’s nice, kinda gives a sensation it’s not really me as I don’t feel it one hundred percent with my hand…. I took grip of it and starting moving up and down. Still under the covers I kick
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November, 15/16th, 2008, Weekend. The weekend started very lazy, slow motion, like a holiday… maybe it was holiday elsewhere. When I woke up that morning, Nick was lying on the mattress, on the floor, beside my bed. As I woke up, I looked at him. He was waking up as well. He was stretching and barely opening only one eye, with a kind of spent face. “Mornin’” he said with a raspy voice. “Hi.” I replied with a smile. With that, silence felt the air. He was looking at my face, but his eyes we
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November, 14th, 2008, Friday. That night I was picturing over and over in my mind the image of Nick, with his hands on the button of his pants, shirtless, looking at me, smiling. Next morning, I was drying my hair with the hair dryer. I think I should let it grow longer, after all, I wanted it to brush like Nick’s. After that, I went to the kitchen, to have breakfast. You know, it’s curious… at home things aren’t like on the TV ad’s where the father, the mother and the kids are sitting tog
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Maybe they'll die or something... LOL KIDDING... they CAN'T die because they're supposed to be sweet... that'd be so very much unfair, to make one cry.. like when I see something about the polar bear... anything bad can happen to them! Mm... I guess after a lot of nice feedback it's time for me to start writing chapter 6!
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Life's beautiful.. there's always something to look forward to, first it's college, then it's work (wow so hectic at work lately... writing stuff here distracts me a little from it). And please, you can always send me a private message. I'll add you as a friend. But well, nothing's better than e-mail. If you want to send me a private e-mail feel free at qualideucoloco@yahoo.com.br
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Thanks for your comment. FIRST OF ALL, PEOPLE, I WAS JUST CHECKING AND THOUGHT nah, nobody's gonna say anything.. and a lot of comments =D ABOUT EDITING... YEAH, I'VE READ SOMETHING ABOUT PEOPLE TO EDIT MY STORIES HERE... I'D LIKE TO KNOW HOW IT WORKS =D
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So, I got the guts.. mmm.. ok only to invite Nick over, but that’s a start, right? We were playing and we ended up wrestling, with him all over me. Gosh, I can’t remember of a deepest gaze in my life… maybe that’s ‘cause no one ever gazed me like that *giggle* I guess no one could ever look me like that, with a hazel tiger gaze, but at the same time so sweet, so it’s hazel like honey, with shiny straight locks, so smooth and delicate along with pink cheeks, pale nose, warming gaze… sigh. When
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I invited Nick to come over to play video games and he accepted. I mean, OMG, can you imagine if we end up wrestling on the floor and I’m all over him?! Wouldn’t it be perfect? “I mean, NO, Peter, behave yourself. I mean, it would be perfect, but it would screw things up so it wouldn’t be perfect. So that, it really would be perfect if I got to hold myself from doing it and play cool and very manly to keep along with the boys… aargh, I don’t even know what I’m saying… I think I’m getting nervou
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That's the thrilling part: Finding a so perfect friend to be close to, to feel close to, and not to say it because you're afraid of losing them if they get you wrong... Thanks for the comment. Chapter 4 is already posted - awaits approval
