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  1. hyper92

    Chapter 11

    Beautiful message, one we all need to be reminded of some times
  2. hyper92

    Chapter 9

    Ooo he dead
  3. hyper92

    Chapter 8

    Um, definitely very gratifying. Damn, froze a man's balls and shattered them.....Comsie, I don't know how that popped in your head, but remind me NOT to piss you off lmao. Great chapter
  4. hyper92

    Chapter 7

    This gives me a theory about who rage is, heh, guess I'll find out soon enough. One thing is for sure, if my theory is wrong Soren is screwed. Great freakin chapter Com. Can't wait to dig back in for more
  5. hyper92

    Chapter 6

    Well, that got dark
  6. hyper92

    Chapter 5

    I'm sorry....did I just read "bouncing the mattress fantastic"? Just when I thought I'd heard all possible euphemisms. I must admit, that's a new one lol
  7. hyper92

    Chapter 2

    Aw man, poor Jarrod
  8. hyper92

    Chapter 15

    Wow, a rare glimpse behind Com's Iron curtain....Very touching:)
  9. hyper92

    Chapter 14

    To be honest, considering all of the stories, character arcs, and plot points you have to keep straight between all of the different books.......I'm absolutely astounded that you only miss a few things here and there lol
  10. hyper92

    Chapter 11

    Looks like the damn is beginning to break. We'll see if Justin can maintain control
  11. hyper92

    Chapter 9

    Hehe, loved some of the little Easter eggs sprinkled throughout this one. I'm sure there were several I didn't catch. But the ones I did, cute touch 😉
  12. hyper92

    Chapter 8

    Lmao, sooo true, and mostly stuff that's so unreal that it takes you out of it completely
  13. hyper92

    Chapter 2

    Omg, soooooooo much to unpack! These last 2 chapters. Where do I.....what can I....going back to Richie...finally telling everyone.......Trevor and Michael.....o.m. EFFING g! I laughed, I cried, I'm going through, like, every emotion at once....and we aren't even at the end of this rabbit hole yet lol. Wow Comsie, you weren't kidding when you said "just wait" lmao. You write a lot of good stuff, man, but for me this is right up there with a class by himself when he finally tells Chris off, and you can't help but punch the air and scream "ALL RIGHT!" Lol it's right up there with that. some times I could just kiss your brain (and I'm just now realizing how Hannibal Lecter-ish that sounds lol) I love how your mind works, man:-D
  14. hyper92

    Chapter 1

    So many tears
  15. hyper92

    Chapter 9

    Wow, very exciting. So many questions finally receiving some answers. Loose threads finally being tied up. Very gratifying. Can't wait to see how it goes with Richie.
  16. Oh good grief, that clip was hilarious. Sorry there's still headaches to deal with over all this, but at least you can still laugh. Good to see it:)
  17. hyper92

    Chapter 4

    ..... Just...Yah I don't even know. I'm usually pretty good at critiquing, but... this actually had me speechless
  18. hyper92

    Chapter 4

    Just......Wow!
  19. hyper92

    Chapter 2

    Wow, I fully suspected Taryn to track Justin down, but the speed was a surprise. Gonna be interesting finding out how he managed it lol
  20. hyper92

    Chapter 5

    I think I just felt something in my brain break lol. Great chapter
  21. hyper92

    Chapter 1

    You do paint quite the pictures lmao. Very nice. Admittedly, it does worry me that Justin shows signs of being too zealous with his budding abilities. Power corrupts even the best. Gonna be interesting to see what, or who, can keep him humble.
  22. hyper92

    Chapter 4

    Um.......WOW! Lol. Awesome chapter, VERY visual.....and there was literally a case-study being done lmao. Dissecting the psychological dynamics of these few chapters alone would take way too much time and room on here, and I'm sure I'm probably one of the few that gets off on that sort of stuff. So let's just boil this comment down to "omg I effing love how your mind works, Com!" Lol
  23. hyper92

    Chapter 3

    This is fascinating...as some one who is big on psychology, I'm loving the way you delve slightly in to elements of the ID, ego, and super ego, and their fight for dominance in a characters behavior.....a lot of this is like a character-study. I'm going to take a blind guess here and assume that isn't by coincidence lol.
  24. hyper92

    Chapter 1

    Rofl...oh that is phenomenal! I want one lol
  25. hyper92

    Chapter 4

    I just love that you incorporated yourself as a character. Careful...That fourth wall damn near broke lol. I must admit, it had me giggling for a good few minutes straight. Loved it, can't wait to see where this all building to
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