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    Chapter 4

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Wow this sh*t is getting real, the idiots don't know when they are beaten, however they will learn the very hard way when the bars in front of them suddenly appear, I wonder if you can burst a blood vessel by blushing, because they are trying very hard to do that
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    Chapter 3

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Finally a breakdown, not pleasant but a necessity, now he has more or less got rid of his demon mother and can now build himself up to what he is and can be going into the future, a very enlightening chapter, a great story, thanks you
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    Chapter 2

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Wow Carl is an absolute idiot, he has in one swift moment totally screwed up his life , karma is such good thing , what you dish out in anger comes back more than 10 fold
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    Chapter 1

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Well interesting, bullies don't like a beat down especially when they come off second best, however they tend to have small brains to go with their small dick and stupidity, he will loose again and again and still not learn anything. Home life is good now
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    Prologue

    mikedup commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Prologue

    Awesome story, it is amazing that it hits to so many readers, his mother is nothing more than an entitled b*tch. She can now do all that he did.
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    Thank you, this was certainly an interesting and entertaining story, complex twists and turns, but very good, I am going to miss the weekly chapters, I hope you have another tale to share with us,
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    Colin 15

    mikedup commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Colin 15

    Awesome chapter, Joe is more outgoing, and it suits him , he tries everything he can , his list of skills is expanding, painting, acting, script writing , plus he seems to be very down to earth, I imagine more family history is bound to surface, good or bad it will happen, miles it seems needs to get off his high horse and confront reality,
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    An awesome chapter, Joe's play was an eye opener,but well received, mhairi is slowly coming around to the realisation that things have on , Joe is simply just awesome. I will certainly miss these characters and story when it ends ,it has been an absolute rollercoaster story, thank you
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    Projects

    mikedup commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Projects

    Another great chapter, Joe so it seems has a lot of hidden talents, writing, acting , plus using family history to bring things to light , it I think will be a bit of an eye opener, mhairi was a bit of surprise with her answer about Joe , but everything ha a side that we try to keep hidden, Colin moving in is a definite move in the right direction, , so progress on all fronts.
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    An interesting chapter, a question that has been a dilemma to answer , what has no easy answer, Joe's question was very valid , the complication of is vast , however I think that sometime in the future a serious bad can of worms will be opened up then I expect all hell to break loose on the all connected with the churches especially the elders. Owain and Colin are really good substitute fathers for Joe,
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    Interesting, chapter, Owain was worried, but it turned out to be for nothing, Joe certainly has a mind of his own no wonder mom and dad and Joe almost come to blows , but he is headstrong and has his own views however Owain brings a different perspective to things having lived with his father, and Joe's dad are off the same block, mhairi is going to be a bit of a nut to crack but crack she will eventually
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    So some calm , however, asking for help is fine the question is will it be the help they need or want , this is the realm after all,, I see another curve ball on the way
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    A really feel good chapter, some semblance of calm, so Dave has finally claimed his inner wolf , now they can get a bit of rest , then I think that the realm is going to have a go at them again
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    Family matters 3

    mikedup commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Family matters 3

    Interesting chapter, the dark side of the family history, I wonder what her digging will uncover about the family, and I imagine the more she digs the more she will discover, it is interesting that some spouses never drove a car , or learnt how to , my own mother never drove a car, interesting part of a family, at least mhairi learnt and did something about it , she seems to be enjoying her trip
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    Well we go from one drama to the next , everything is getting more intense, common sense is it seems is a thing of the past, they will be tried more and more till the realm is happy and hopefully they can return, I don't think that we have reached the bottom yet,
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    A good chapter, they are learning more about each other, they a having a good time exploring, plus the couple are interesting company, I like that they are visiting the customer, but leaning about each place , trying the local flavours, and food , not eating the same as you would at home, they have realised that they don't really get on each others nerves being together constantly, which is awesome, I liked this chapter.
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    Holiday

    mikedup commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Holiday

    It's great that they finally got to Italy, I am impressed that did lots together but also did things by themselves, they have crossed a bridge and progress into moving in together, I think that it is a giant step for Colin but a very welcome one. They can go at it like bunnies and no one to complain, they are definitely now a couple, congratulations I say
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    Well progress of sorts Colin mother has a lot of soul searching to do, she hopefully will see the light, miles needs to get his out of his behind and get with the program or he will loose way more than just a brother, his mother is seeing some sense, I suppose baby steps are better than no steps, now off to the Mediterranean
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    An interesting chapter, they now know more of the family history, a bit dubious, but successful at it , we all know, war is what drives some economies , and it made them money, we also have to remember that happened in a different era, rules were really lax at the time, now we need to discover the amount of money available
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    State Visit

    mikedup commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in State Visit

    Well that bridge over troubled waters has been crossed , I would not say successfully but it has been crossed and the thawed out level on the other side was not so bad , I would say progress, has been made, Miles well some bridges are way more difficult to cross, it will be interesting to see how a visit to "mom's" will go. , progress definitely progress
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    Well we had the calm and then the hell , they seem to be fighting something, but more than that , I hope gone but not gone, interesting chapter,
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    Colin 10

    mikedup commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Colin 10

    Well kudos to Colin, he has put it out there, his brother is almost a non starter he is just thick skulled , his mother copies him , annelisa is more accommodating I think that the twins really want to see their uncle and she will allow it , getting his mother along, that is bit of a toss up , they are getting closer by the day and are now more of Couple than before the European trip. A really good feeling chapter
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    Family Matters

    mikedup commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Family Matters

    Interesting chapter, at least mhairi listened and was open to some ideas , Owain was very diplomatic with consulting with mhairi first , Joe some gets to the jackpot , being able to do something for himself, I think that Joe and his father are going to drift further and further away from each other, the common ground between them just goes exist , i think that colin will eventually decide Owain place is definitely home for him
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    Interesting trip to Norway, they both have a tremendous amount of joy out if it , plus the family seemed to both of them a bit of information about the business, now lets wait for the meeting back home, a sensible way to move in with each other without actually moving in, a great chapter
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    Wow everything seemed to be going well, hugs and good feelings abound , then suddenly all hell breaks loose, I wonder what is up next,
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