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Well what a uplifting chapter to start everything was running really well, everything going to plan , then we end the story with a shocking disaster, it just proves that human cruelty really knows no end. I have loved this entire story, it brought tears, sadness, heartbreak and joy often at the same time. Thank you for entertaining us through this journey
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An awesome uplifting chapter, HOME for a few boys a place some had at one time they were lost in world but have now found new homes , a lots love and help given and received, I will certainly miss this story once it ends, it has been a roller coaster of emotions but it was worth it, thank you
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Well I think that "hell" has a special place for all the cards that have been disposed of, plus of course all the rest that have died with help from all sides of the coin , this was quite an intense chapter, roger is fast becoming a father to a very large group of boys
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Wow more brothers connected with each other , the twins willing joined Rogers family, the home is becoming more of a Home than before, more of the adults are getting together as they find each other , Roger has suddenly expanded his family he is now a father and the boys now have a grandfather, Juan is happy more and more of the rescuers are suddenly finding partners, the clubs down south are going to start feeling the heat and then they will close I doubt it will be willingly. A very intense chapter, but a lot of love given and received
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Another awesome yet intense chapter, Oli's parents have come to some realization that they are not going back "home" they have seen, heard and experienced things most parents would have no idea about , they haven't lost their son , but have gained a huge family, Roger and Thomas have started getting a huge support base to which they can contribute, we now discover the "club" had cards outside the country , i somehow think this investigation is going to span years to recover boys who need help, it makes me realize that so, so many more boys will unfortunately never be recovered. To see that micah could have a brother is enlightening, the family is expanding very fast
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Wow, this was difficult chapter to read. There was so much to absorb and process, one family falling apart with then an absolutely entitled mother, who hates her husband, however she is going to burn going down I think, between her daughter and her father. More boys rescued, a lot of father figures suddenly appear on the scene, all who are welcomed to help with whatever they can , the "godfathers" are slowly but surely turning over the "cards" to the investigation crew, dead or alive the cards are falling down. The academy is functioning properly with such rapid intervention from all and sundry. Oliver has turned into quite a leader, his family has suddenly realized that their own family is not so small as anymore. If they go back home 4 seats on the plane will be insufficient, Sandra has turned into a house mother, I think she is going to be the rock in a lot of boys lives. This was another awesome chapter, thank you
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Emotional chapter, the boys are "Home" i am happy about the reunion of Oliver and his family, it went better than i expected, the academy is functioning as well as could be expected, a lot work was done but a lot more needs to be done , but there us time for that , more boys no doubt will be arriving there, Thomas is well with on his way to be a respectable adult who can offer advice, cuddles and help. The deck of cards is slowly very slowly falling , but fall they will. The twins are next to be part of Rogers clan . There is a certain light at the end of the tunnel. An intense and awesome chapter, thank you
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Well another very intense chapter, lots of life love and help, to start pathways reopened bridges rebuilt, and then the reality of the boys pain and lives, Oli's parents have heard and seen the other boys , however I don't think they have a real idea about Oliver. Pain is my first thought that they will experience, everything that they believed in is going to go down the gutter. They will either commit or run away, jasper is the one who can see through what is happening. I cannot wait for the next chapter, hopefully not another tear jerker but I expect it to be the same, i will have to stock up on the Kleenex
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Chapter 1: Vaya con Dios, Carlos
mikedup commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Vaya con Dios, Carlos
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Well talk about a soul searching and heart opening encounter, with Roger bearing his soul and Thomas and Brendan telling their own tale, i think that they have all bonded together to help with the the academy, the sudden need to get the academy open that day is gaining momentum and they need urgent supplies . I think that suddenly doors will open and gifts and donations will arrive. I think that Oliver's parents are in for a shocking surprise when they meet their son again, I agree kneenex will run out . Everyone involved will either start a family or expand their existing family. Exciting and interesting times ahead.
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Wow what a heart stringing chapter, it tugged the heart a few times, Melissa and her surprising call to her dad , Roger and the Dom's request. Then Juan. This chapter opened a new avenue which the don no doubt can get answers to questions the law can't, this can get more "pigs " into the net and rescue more boys than expected. The cards are going to fall maybe 1 by 1 but fall they will. This was a really emotional chapter, I cannot wait for more
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Well, Oli's parents are glad he has been found , I wonder if they are going to be prepared for what they will see and say when they meet , I don't think either side wil be adequately prepared, but it will happen, I hope good but I am not sure , Roger inherited a school but it needs to be cleaned, I don't mean just physically but mentally as well as, i think that the boys need to help their vision could go a long way to help to help them recover, I don't think all the boys will be welcomed back home with open arms , it will need to be a Home more than just a home (as in a place to stay) it needs to be filled with love, peace and help. Trying but exciting times ahead, On another note, i hope that 2025 is going to be inspiring and provide all dreams to be become reality.
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More drama, however they seem to be okay with this , animal it looks like still needs to be taken down
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Wow the plan worked, they rescued the boys without any bloodshed, except a few who will wish they had in fact been killed, the boys i think will need to be kept together for now to help each other, roger needs a much bigger residence, if only temporary but he will need it it Thomas has matured rapidly, he needs Roger as much a Roger needs him. Now to capture the needs 2 in the line who would have killed everyone, at the farm , now they need to be taken down and maybe to be taken out . Roger has a lot of pain to deal with, however I don't think he has the time to dwell on it. Thing need to be done, and rather fast.
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Wow what a stunt and they pulled it off , they hoys are off the farm, a few pawns are dead, the 2 in the limo need to be removed from the equation, they are killing men with information, Rogers life is about to explode or implode depending on the new arrival, good or bad the courier has information which could be vital to the investigation, Melissa suddenly became a mom to the twins , however it happened she is overjoyed, now Sam needs to buy into the equation. It looks like the the deck of cards is starting to collapse, a lot of the deck are in for a shocking surprise when they realize it is over for them, On another note " May peace and goodwill be with all over this festive season"