mikedup
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Excellent chapter, it was most informative, pl
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Brilliant chapter, a great interesting start to a new story. It looks like we could be in for a really good coaster ride.
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Excellent chapter, a few loose ends, but not every story can be tied down with every loose end getting final end, but thanks again for an excellent story
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Many thanks. I await with eager anticipation
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Another excellent chapter and a very good ends to this story, our weekly fix of a chapter of story by you is almost at a endi really hope that you have a New story online soon, many thanks for such entertaining reading.
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Brilliant chapter I really hope that things go well, I am sad that there is only 1 more chapter.
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Thanks a million
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Brilliant chapter, I am sad that it has come to an end. I really hope that you have a New story online soon. Thank for such entertaining reading.
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Brilliant chapter and a really excellent surprise, I was not expecting that but is a really good surprise, I must say a very interesting turn of events
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Great chapter, I wonder what other drama is ahead, all of the drama makes for very interesting reading
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Excellent chapter, I think a big deal now that school is finished, I forsee a few teething problems and blips of drama ahead
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Awesome chapter, it seems that this story is really going to develop really well , I suspect a bump in the road or should I say river
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Wow talk about getting the story off with very big bang, this seems to be the start of a really interesting story. An awesome chapter
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Excellent chapter, this keeps getting better and better,
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Brilliant chapter, finality to some degree I suppose, I hope things go well between the two of them , interesting times ahead
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Excellent chapter, I am glad that he is going to settle down, I hope that Louis recovers quickly, I wonder how permanent this stint will be i.e. staying in Perth
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Interesting chapter, definitely a strange turn of events, why does it seem that there is more to this than meets the eye,
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Excellent chapter, things are definitely going ahead. what is he going to do about school?
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Excellent chapter, minor drama again at least he did not toss all his toys out of the for, just enough to get results, interesting times ahead
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Awesome chapter, wow every chapter seems to be more intense than the previous one,
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Wow I thought that he was going be DEEP trouble, Sebastian seems to be the forgiving sort, this has been another excellent chapter
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Oh s#£t the s**t is going to hit the fan in a really big way , I agree. He has no control over his emotions and is running away from his issues
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Excellent chapter, makes me wonder what is the story with Chas. Interesting developments ahead
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Brilliant chapter, this is getting better, with some interesting developments ahead. More please
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A really great start to a new story, it would seem that this is also going to be a wild ride, I look forward to reading it
