DeadEnd

Gute Besserung!

i don't want to pester you, but... can you already give us a small update about your plans concerning Perry + Jesse? I'm soooo looking forward to a new sequel...

Thanks for your answers, but i'm still not convinced. Okay, Brian wanted David to be a Brian, Jr., i agree. But Brian also knew that David and Oliver were close, he couldn't seriously have thought that he could turn David against Oliver... especially not to murder him. Brian also knew that he did a lot of ugly things to David and therefore David would most probably not be in a hurry to stand by his side. He didn't even knew that David remembered/imagined/believed Mary to be the one and only source of all his bad life. But I guess my biggest problem is the motivation of David. I get it that he wasn't able to trust anyone anymore. But that doesn't mean he has to turn against Frank, who just saved his life. Or Franks dad, whom he didn't even knew. Or Oliver, his brother and one and only ally his whole life (who made that sad mistake not to free David though, but still...) Yes, i liked to think that too: David was acting all along to make his father believe he was on his side and then rescue the others. But i stopped thinking that when there was this scene where Oliver got the gun from Brian (who wanted him to shoot his own father), and when Sam took the gun from Frank, it was David who helped Brian to get it back. So this theory collapsed after that... why would David have done this if his goal was to rescue the others? That sounds good. But David could have never known that this situation would even occur when he started "playing along" with his father. And after Frank did not kill Sam when he had the chance - why would David still help Brian to get the gun back? I admit - english is not my native language - and since noone else seems to have difficulties with this part, i guess i just have to reread the whole story - would do it anyway

ATTENTION: don't read this until you finished reading TOSOM (The Other Side Of Me) - i'll post some content and questions about the last three chapters here. So... first: this a great story, i liked it very much. I read it all at once during the last days of 2006 after Dom had announced that he finished it (anticipation would have killed me if i'd have had to wait weeks and months between the chapters). But there is something i truly don't understand and therefore strikes me as somewhat... unreal... which i can easily forgive, but am not used to in Doms Stories. So, maybe you guys could help out and try to explain it to me, i guess i just missed something. In the beginning of chapter 14 Brian had Sam, Frank and Oliver kidnapped. Frank and David were the last ones to arrive at the house (before they were brought to the boat). Frank had just recently freed David from his horrible prison. While Brian kidnapped Frank too, David was able to slip onto the boat undiscovered. Frank and Oliver tried to escape but failed, because David chose to show up and interfere (all this in chapter 13). Sooo... what i really really do not understand is, why in chapter 14 David would stand by the side of his father after that. I mean, that man tortured and mistreated him all his life - he just had nine days to remember all of it. And what seemed even more wrong to me is that Brian (his father) would even let him do that and give him a gun. He despised and hated David all through the story, beat him up, imprisoned him... why would he trust him now to help him kidnapp and murder(?) his own beloved brother, the friend of his brother and the father of his friends brother? I can't imagine Brian to do that, i mean, there is just no trust between the two of them from neither side. And there they are now, standing together as if they were the best of allies all along? Okay, as i said, i liked the whole story, it was different, but as excellent as all the other DomLuka stories . Please help me understand that questioned part, you will make my day!

alright... i just read Dom's Blog entry about not posting the last chapter(s) of TOSOM before the beginning of the new year. That made me realise, that i was checking for updates since december 24th on a regular basis of 3-4 hours... :wacko: so... hello everyone, my name is Florian and i'm a Domaholic.

Well, this indeed was a very good answer... you are working on Part VI (there will be a Part VI !!!), and that really is GREAT news!!! I can not imagine how much time it takes to write/edit/rewrite this story, post it, answer all the stupid questions in your calm and polite way... and I am honestly absolutely grateful that you are doing it. It is just ridiculous, but during the last few weeks (since was reading it for the first time to be precise) i got so excited about this story... i just NEED to know what will happen! Argh! (I guess this is a sign that you did an excellent job as an author, but nevertheless i somehow hope the feeling will pass.) Please, do not worry about high anticipation. English is not my native language, but even I dare to say that you are a very talented writer, and IMHO most people (including myself) want to see how P & J continues above all. Actually I fear that maybe you put yourself under too much pressure... maybe a little less details, a little less action won't do any harm... believe me: you don't have to try to make us love this story - we just do... Thank you very much for writing Perry & Jesse and bringing some more joy in my life. I owe you something for that, we all do. DeadEnd P.S. >>>I'm glad people want to read more of the story, but also concerned that I will let my fans down. Do you really think we will consider bad sequels (and I don't think you're capable of writing bad ones) a bigger disappointment than no continuation at all?

... when is P & J going to be continued? i know it's probably selfish to ask, but i can't help it, i'm addicted...