Bndmetl
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I just realised you still have to wait a whole other chapter. But don't worry, it's already written.
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Did it turn out like you thought? haha
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Hi drsawzall, I hope you won't be disappointed.
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Thanks JayCee. I missed you folks too, believe me. It's great posting again.
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Hi there, thank you. I hope you like the rest.
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Hey buddy, missed ya. Maybe we could get a cameo by Benny for ya. lol
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Thanks lovely, it's fun doing this again. I miss everyone.
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Chapter Three Stone – The Stone McKay What the hell just happened? Everyone at the table is looking around like they’ve just been hit with shrapnel, reading each other's expressions, trying to make sense of the blast that went off. One of Lee’s brothers—I think it was Will—stood abruptly and shouted across the yard. “Dad?” His other dad and mom had already taken off after Lee, sprinting after the guy like their hearts were about to stop. His friend was hoveri
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You're powering through this. 😀I haven't read it in a long time, but still think about them all. It's weird how your own characters become almost real, sounds crazy. haha.
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There was Williams' Love, Ian's Heart, and Seb & Beau. The Seb & Beau I unpublished so it could be redone. The first two chapters have been done and are available now with the third coming soon. Thank you for reading the stories. Going forward I'm going to try and have a bit more backstory without going to far backward.
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Sorry, yeah, that was the worlds smallest mention in the first chapter. “We don’t usually take the adults though, Prez,” Rhodes called out. “We grabbing her too?” “No,” Ash replied firmly. “We don’t, and we’re not this time either. We’re getting the kids out first. Then me and a few others will circle back to help her—Ryker’s sister—get clear when the dust settles.” But I can edit this chapter and re-iterate it. (Look at me with the big words.) 😁 Thanks for sticking with it, bless ya.
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Lee – 1:30 am The neighborhood was dark—dead quiet—except for one house about six doors up. A single porch light burned outside the front door. No garage. No hidden vehicle. Driveway clear. Street out front empty. Good. And... maybe not. If someone comes home mid-op, things could get complicated. Fast. I press a finger to my earpiece. “Dex, got any eyes on the house with the porch light?” “Already on it, my friend,” Dex replied, voice half-distracted.
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I'm trying to remedy some of that going forward, let me know if you find anything that needs more explanation. I started this fresh off the back of the other story. I can't figure out how to post the next chapter As soon as I figure it out you'll have the next one.
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Sorry, I honestly didn't give it much thought because I started writing this straight after the epilogue of Williams' Love. I'll have a pass through and see if I can fix that problem. If you see anything going forward give it a shout and I'll try and clear it up asap, maybe add some depth. Thank you for reading, I hope you like the rest.
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I've definitely missed it and everyone. Had some serious health issues but fighting back, all the while learning, writing, and more learning. I hope that's paid off.
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Chapter One – Come full circle “You cheated!” Luke shrieked, laughter bubbling as he pointed an accusing finger at me from across the coffee table. “I did not,” I said indignantly, snatching another piece of his candy from our makeshift tic-tac-toe board like a total grown-up. “Hey!” he yelled, lunging across the table to steal one of my corner pieces of kettle corn. “I saw that,” I laughed, pointing dramatically at his popcorn-thieving fingers. “No, yo
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Lee The sound of my name came gruff and irritated. “Blundell-Sunderland.” I opened one eye, wincing at the florescent glare overhead. Shit. Right. Jail. My whole body ached from sleeping on concrete, and I was ninety percent sure I drooled on my shoulder at some point. Graceful. I stood, stepping carefully over the snoring, possibly unconscious guy in the corner. He hadn’t been too happy with my refusal to hand over my boots last night. He got rough. I got rougher. Now
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Lee's not fourteen anymore. He’s twenty-two now—financially responsible, business-savvy, fiercely loyal to the family that saved him. But beneath the surface, he's still haunted by a past he barely survived. He’s dodging therapy, reeling from the discovery of a missing brother, and surrounded by a meddling, well-meaning family who love hard and interfere harder. His moral compass? Bent. His heart? Still up for grabs. Adulting isn’t a finish line—it’s a fight. And Lee’s about to learn some battles aren’t meant to be fought alone.
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Chapter Seven – Cole “Cole, wait. Don’t leave,” Doll called out. I held up my hand heading toward my bike, once again frantically searching my pockets for the key. I have never been more relieved when I felt the cold metal of the jagged bastard in my life. I straddled the bike, jammed the key into the ignition, then pushed the button to start. I was pulling my helmet on when Doll finally caught up to me. I blew out a breath. “I’m fine, Doll. It’s fine.” Pulling the clutc
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Hey, I hope everything went okay with your surgery. I'm still recovering and will be for a while but I'm functioning. The pink hair kinda gets explained in the next chapter, and I think Damon just drank past quota for human intelligence. Haha.
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Are you crushing on Cole or Damon, Wesley?
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Chapter Six - Damon Staring into my cereal, I mentally kick my ass for drinking so much last night. I hope like hell I will be able to keep this down. This is probably the worst hangover I’ve ever had. My head is pounding from all the drinks we had last night at the club after the wake. Seems we’d all put a few too many away. I did wake up alone though, so… Maybe it’s wishful thinking after Cole told me he wanted to go on a date with me. God, it took everything in me not to do a dorky happy
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Chapter Five – Cole It’s been a few days since we lost Mrs. Montgomery, the family unit is still a mess and the rest of us are trying our best to ensure they have everything they need. The only person I have lost is my grandma and that nearly killed me. I can’t even imagine what the Montgomery’s are going through. The bell tinkled above the shop door bringing me out of my morose throughts. Micah looked over his shoulder to see if it was a customer. It was Kelly who looked plain worn o
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Chapter Four – Damon Oh, man, I feel like shit, my head pounding the second it left the pillow. That shouldn’t be happening. I only had two beers at the bar last night. My nose is runny, damn it, and I’m cold and shivering. I pulled the covers up and over my head. Yuck, I hate being sick. Stupid client. I tried to keep myself away from his coughing and spluttering kid. Not that I’m blaming the kid, poor little guy. I hope he doesn’t feel this bad. I do hope his dad gets it though – ja
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