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  1. Bndmetl

    Chapter 19 - Ember

    Thanks mikedup. He's a cockroach for sure, fingers crossed he'll get his.
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    Chapter 19 - Ember

  3. It was late when I returned from the city last night, then a fitful night’s sleep. I feel like a zombie today. A horn blasted from the car in the next lane. I glared at the asshole then realised I’d drifted into his lane. Jesus, Ember concentrate. Correcting my steering quickly as to not cause an accident, I reached over and blasted the air conditioner to maximum trying to wake myself up. Looking back to the road, I spied a bakery up ahead and pulled over, hopped out in time to earn some
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    Chapter 18

    It is sad that this happens in real life, to anyone. I too hope Katie comes back taking control. Brady and Ember do need to get out of their own way, and you're right they do need to learn how to communicate with each other. It seems Ember is stuck, Brady is flailing and over compensating.
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    Chapter 18

    I've heard that too from a domestic violence counsellor. In the area we were in the stats were highest among female same sex couples, then men against women, women against men, and lowest was male same sex couples. But women against men was on the rise. I was surprised by all of this, the one thing the counsellor mentioned was that the stats are skewed among all groups as so much goes unreported. They get their resources indicated by the stats.
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    Chapter 18

    If it were my daughter, nobody would be seeing Sean again, least of all my girl.
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    Chapter 18

    She'll definitely have plenty of family support, even from friends and the extended family. This is one lady who isn't alone. As for Brady and Ember, gah, they just won't do what we want them to do.
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    Chapter 18

    From beginning to end, this is one of the most difficult chapters we've ever attempted. There just doesn't seem to be a right way to handle it. Our biggest hope was that we didn't offend or upset anyone. So thank you for your comment, we appreciate it.
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    Chapter 18

    It is unacceptable in any relationship, it's sad that people - men and woman - feel trapped, like they have no way out.
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    Chapter 18

    You are correct, any sort of violence is abhorrent. Violence at the hand of someone who supposedly loves you is despicable, cowardly, and evil.
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    Chapter 18

    “This day sucks!!” I yelled in frustration as Ember glared at me. When we finally made it back to the garage to lock the bikes away before going home. Novy left not long after we got here, angry with me because I wouldn’t take him to see Katie. I hadn’t even told him why she was in there. She didn’t want Novy to know that her boyfriend had beaten her until she was ready to tell him. I understand that Katie doesn’t want this to become the number one item on the gossip cycle. I don’t like th
  12. Bndmetl

    Chapter 20

    JAM, I do love that kid. Heart of gold. Great chapter, its good to see Melvin being given a second chance and the opportunity to be part of the group. It's up to him to take it, I really hope he does.
  13. Read them first, then went back and commented. That and I get to read the draft copies.
  14. Thank god, the boys are okay. You're not supposed to make me cry, AH.
  15. You S.O.B, they better be okay.
  16. Awesome chapter John. Can I get Lucas's number?
  17. The last week and a half have been amazing, I’ve had to pinch myself to make sure it’s real. Being with Ember is so much better in real life than I imagined it would be in my head. He’s sexy as hell, I can’t keep my eyes off him. Watching him muck around and play with his niece while we waited for the boy's race made my stomach flutter. I would love to do this all again with him, the picket fence, 2.5 kids, the works. That’s how it should have been in the first place, not that I’d give up Katie
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    Chapter 16 - Ember

    They are a cute bunch, little Ember is adorable. I think so anyway. Glad you liked it.
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    Chapter 16 - Ember

    Whether they are or not it seems they are the best of friends. We should all be so lucky to have one I think.
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    Chapter 16 - Ember

    I hate that there are so many kids in foster care, some because there's no one else, but it seems most are living someone else's consequences.
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    Chapter 16 - Ember

    I agree vinegar on fish and chips is awesome, and I love it. Brown vinegar is the best, but white will work in a pinch. The things kids say to put you on the spot huh!
  22. “Are we crazy for letting the boys drive together in your truck?” Brady asked. I observed as they drove in front of us, they were doing okay. There didn’t seem to be any need to worry about the two young boys driving the truck, we had the trailer attached to Brady’s SUV we were following in. We had a couple hours drive ahead of us, and we still needed to get to the race track to set up for tomorrow or at the very least store the trailer there. The grounds were patrolled by security; plus a l
  23. Love Steph, she's a kick ass sister and takes no prisoners, family or no. Poor Sam. I'm sure though, with the help of all his new friends he'll be fine after the initial shock of the pictures. Great chapter John.
  24. Chapter 15 Brady Monday again, I made sure I arrived at work with enough time to make a coffee while Mags went through what was on the books for the week, then found a vacant seat away from Ember and Justin. Talk about awkward, It is not that I’m trying to avoid Ember, I am just not sure how to act around him now. His face lit up winking at me when I walked into the lunch room, which gave me butterflies in my stomach. I feel like I am sixteen again. Next to him was my other cas
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    The Story

    This I'm on board with.
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