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Thank you I really like to hear people enjoy this story. I really love Liam to, he has a childlike quality and really is the rock for the people around him that he loves.
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Thanks guys and I can't wait to see what they get up to for Benny's birthday.
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How freaking funny would that be!! I'll have to give it some thought.
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Benny’s Birthday – Part I “Holy Crap!” Liam let out a rush of air and pulled his sunglasses from the top of his head to cover his eyes, “Welcome to the sun people!” “GET IN THE VAN!” We all yelled at him. He hopped in and sat in the seat next to me in the front row leaned over and kissed my cheek with a big grin on his face. He was bouncing in the seat with excitement. Liam turned in his seat to see if his Mom was okay wedged beside Katherine and Oliver, “You aren’t too squi
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Thank you. Wouldn't it be great if most relationships were like this. Sometimes when writing this I forget the boys are still teenagers, and like to put a little of the insecurity of the feeling of being a teenager in there.
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Thanks Wesley, I don't why but I was panicking about this chapter that no one would like it.
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Valentines Day “You okay Babe,” Liam said putting his hand down on my knee and squeezing it, pulling me out of my daze. I gave him a weak smile, “Yeah, I guess so. Umm… could we go to Dad’s on the way home I want to talk to him about what the lawyer said? I know it’s my decision, but I’d like to have his opinion before I go any further.” We have finally moved into our new house, it’s so weird having no parents around. Living with Katherine and Oliver is easy, we all do our f
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Thank you for sharing his story. I laughed, I cried and even got angry. One thing is for sure I enjoyed every chapter.
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Katherine's brother brought the vehicle to the house for Will. The brother was a surprise for Katherine the truck a surprise for Will. Sorry, I should have been clearer. I hope your enjoying the story otherwise.
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Unfortunately the bitch is based on a real Mother I know, can you imagine how upsetting that could be for the poor kid. Thanks again for reading I appreciate your comments every time.
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You are a lot nicer than me BA, I was thinking car bomb maybe a little extreme but it would have a certain finality to it don't you think. But alas it isn't that type of story. And don't fear Katherine is going to be fine, just first time parent jitters. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment I much appreciate it.
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Houses and Mothers My eyes roll back as Liam glides gently in making love to me, he leans forward kissing me, it feels like we have become one. God!! I’ve missed this. Liam slides out leaving in only the head and back in over my prostate causing me to moan. “Grrr… Baby… I love you so much,” I tell him then kissing him again slow, curling my tongue around his then sucking on it. Liam groans into my mouth with trying to take back control of the kiss making me smile. He took my cock
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I'm glad you liked it so far, there is more to come. Thank you for reading and giving me feedback it's much appreciated.
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I know where you're coming from, take it from an Aussie. I was working on a resort in USA and the only Aussie there for about 6 months. With the exception of my parents - who were English immigrants - I didn't really hear my accent in that time. I was walking through the resort one day and thought I heard an Australian accent and was excited. Then I realised it was new staff who had come from South Africa. The subtleties between the three are very slight to the untrained ear. When I first started work on the resort I could tell a southern accent. By the time I left you folks and come back home, I could tell the difference for example between someone raised in Dallas and someone raised in San Antonio. The same could be said for the difference between Savannah and Atlanta. I could also tell the difference between rural and city accents from the same state or place. The vastness of the American accents shocked and amazed me at the same time. I loved it. And I come to realise, no matter what country you come from, you can always tell the difference between private education and public. I don't mean that in a bad way just an observation so please don't anyone take offense, I come from the public education and full of G'day's, c'mon's and reckon's. I have personally found people with a private education tend to use less slang and contractions when they speak. I'm not implying in any way that either is not educated or intelligent we talk different is my point.
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Sorry about that, I wasn't paying attention to grammarly and I corrected the change, oops.
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Thank you for reading and for the feedback, I sincerely hope you like the story as you go through the chapters
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Here's a question, should we send them all down to Florida for Benny's 'birfday' weekend??
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Thanks for the tip, I didn't give it quite that much thought. Maybe you've been a victim to this?? But I know my older nephew will be one this coming weekend.
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Ho Ho Ho Merry Christmas Liam opened the front door, “Be ready in ten Babe. We have to take the truck to the mechanics this afternoon if we want it back before Christmas Day.” “Yeah, yeah, I don’t understand the urgency. All this secrecy between you and Dad is driving me crazy.” I murmur as I trudge upstairs to the bathroom. <>-<>-<> “Dude! Why are we stopping at Office Max?” Liam asks me. “I want to quickly check out some laptops they have on sal
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The coaches insight into their relationship in intriguing, maybe there will be hope for the future. Just now isn't their time being that they are teenagers. But then again it contradicts what his Dad saw in them. Regardless, it would be nice for Corey to find some kind of inner peace for at least a moment. That kind of sadness can take it's toll on any adult let alone a teenager when everything feels like the end. Fingers crossed.
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Time for a Change. Liam is laying on the couch with his head in my lap lightly snoring. He developed a severe cold after our weekend away for my birthday at the Cabin. He’s been off of school most of the week in bed. When I got home from school, he was laying on the couch watching the Elvis Presley movie Clam Bake. It always makes me chuckle when he gets sick, Liam loves watching old movies like they are comfort food. I prefer Dean Martin and Jerry Lewis or Gene Kelly myself, but Elvi
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This story is heartbreaking, I feel for Corey he is just a kid walking around with blinders on and the crush of the real world is hitting him hard. I'm glad he has his Dad, it's hard to imagine a Mother - or a father - so brainwashed they wouldn't love their son unconditionally. They can not understand it or not like it but I don't get them wanting to make a kids life harder than it has to be. Aren't you supposed to love your kids no matter the circumstances? Great chapter, you had my emotions were all over the place I think I'll need a mood stabilizer. LOL Good job.
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Thankyou, I'll let know when the next one is ready
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I was a florist up until last June, we had to close in the end a big supermarket chain opened taking away all foot traffic. We were only new to town and didn't have a big enough reputation for weddings yet. So no I don't think all florists are like that. But I do think we can all be a drama queen when we want to. I'm sorry about your husband, life just isn't fair sometimes. I'm glad you have fond memories, you should share some of your stories of him so we can meet him too.
