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This is the worst website to maneuver around. Going from one story to another is impossible unless you remember how. It is different every time I turn off my tablet.
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I have enjoyed the ride. This is my 4th time through the whole story. I just wish you would hurry. You've written thefinal story so please hurry with the last 10 chapters of CDMX.
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How many more chapters of CDMX are you going to write, I ask because you suggested we read Cadet in which we met the twins, Jefferson and Roo, and we know CJ and Owen left Mexico suddenly and we know nothing about that. Bill
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The Mexico issue hasn't happened. I assume it happens in chapter 15. Also is there any chapter where the twins are born, except in Cadet?
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Not sure why I've read this story to this point. From reading Cadet I know there is more to come. You have not matched what happened in that story, but how many more chapters you are planning.
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Over The Rainbow • Part IV
bbonnett3 commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part IV
Like others have said, this was a very emotional episode. I had to read it through tears. CJ's worry about Ritchie is the best. It shows how much he loves him. I just wonder how many more "important" people CJ is going to meet and influence. I think a meeting (confrontation maybe) with the current President would be awesome. May also influence Mr. Trump positively. Keep up the good work. Bill -
Just so you know, I might not read the story if CJ wasn't front and center. I have read through the entire story twice now. The lost boy who arrived in Washington after being kicked out by his father has become a spectacular young man with an unlimited future. Love it! Bill
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As I have stated before, I wondered how you would end this part of CJ's involvement. I thought it was very well done. I'm sorry I don't agree with him about Mrs. Clinton even though I am a gay senior citizen. Nuff said about the election. I have one request and that is to involve Ritchie more. I have lost track of how old he is. He isn't at Walls yet is he? His love for his brother is very special. Bill
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I know I have said this before. CJ will be mighty disappointed about the result of the election. I could agree with him if I didn't feel like I do about Ms. Clinton. She has a lot of dirt on her hands. I Think it will be a fun ride until the election. Keep up the good work. Bill
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It scares me to think you are ending this story. But I am glad you are continuing in "Georgetown." I am curious as to how CJ will handle the election. I will say no more. I also hope that Ritchie will develop some friends and make them a part of the story. CJ and his friends are fantastic young people and as President Obama said, knowing there might be students out there just like them. Can't wait for Georgetown. Keep up the good work. Bill
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Interesting about Patrick. I think when they first met I had a feeling about him. I hope he does well. Missed Ritchie this episode. I enjoy his comments and have to admit I laugh my butt off when he talks about butt sex. Oh well love them all. Keep up the good work.
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December 2015 • Part I
bbonnett3 commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in December 2015 • Part I
I am still so impressed with Ritchie. I know CJ's influence is big for Ritchie, but he is a great kid. I can't believe how much CJ has grown and matured. I would be proud to have a son like him or grandson. CJ's dads are also doing a fantastic bringing him along into their business. Obviously getting tossed by his step father is the best thing that ever happened to him. Keep up the good work. Bill -
I lost a parent to dementia. I hope CJ fully understands the illness. I am really happy Ritchie and CJ are together. I think the dad's will be happy to have Ritchie around when CJ goes off to school. I also hope he brings some great friends to the story as he settled in in DC.
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Gosh another fantastic chapter. My only problem with it was the end of Chapter 9. We never got to hear Ritchie's reaction to CJ's offer to live in DC. Well my imagination handled that. CJ is interesting. He is anti Republican, yet is pro gun. I happen to be the other way. I am an anti gun Log Cabin Republican. I personally supported Marco Rubio and am jealous of CJ meeting and working with him. I also am happy to see Owen compromising regarding the gun training. I hope you are able to get CJ to help Brad in his school work. Honestly I do not like the over use of alcohol by teenagers. I made sure my kids drank in moderation. Thanks again for continuing with this great story.
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I am sure I predicted the death of their parents. I honestly think Ritchie should eventually move in with CJ and his dad's. I enjoyed the chapter and I think CJ's actions with his dad when he complained about going home was perfectly normal. One reviewer said he was being immature. Christ he is only 17. Give him a break.
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CJ never ceases to amaze me. His actions in class and then his actions in hi society. I agree with his fathers they will be paying big time for him in the future. This was a very enjoyable chapter. But I did think we might have some carryover from Bradley's activity when they went to Boston. By the way a great town. I enjoyed reading about their travelling around the city. My son lives back there and has taken me to many of the places they went. I'm a left coaster. Bill
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September was a great chapter. I really enjoyed Bradley's confrontation with his grandfather. I also can't believe how he has developed such a hard personality. He is completely different from CJ or his brother, but they all seem to fit together. I was proud of how CJ acted during the confrontation. But honestly he did not have to be the instigator, but he was there to back up his buddy. Keep up the good work. Bill
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CJ is proving to be quite a leader especially of his group. He says he doesn't want to have an elected position, but he really doesn't need an election. His actions take the place of an election. I am glad you had the doctor warn him about the use of condoms. It also was interesting that you explained that CJ and been thoroughly trained on the Catamaran. Yet in the story there was very little of the training. I think it is a great way to accomplish some fete without going through the activity in the story. You have created quite a story. I don't think any of us will be happy when you finally finish. I really want to see what type of person he becomes both in College and after. Please keep up the good work.
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Another well written chapter. CJ and Harley seem so real. I definitely like the music references and the hope by his fathers that his darkness is gone. I hope so too.
