sanmariano
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The cutting to punish himself for homosexual thoughts and desires is fascinating. I'm familiar with 'other' ways of doing it, mental not physical. You really create a thick atmosphere around Billy and his dad, and it's creepy. This is a compelling read!
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Great chapter 3! You are building a lot of conflict and tension between the boys which makes it very exciting and sexy! So easy to keep in reading. Billy seems to have so many secrets and so much to hide.
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First day, not the first time.
sanmariano commented on NightOwl88's story chapter in First day, not the first time.
OMG! Billy's reaction to his desires are so intense. Makes me remember .... ugh! Very good chapter and the boys are really sexy. -
Very good first chapter. It sets the whole scene nicely and gives a clear understanding of both boys, promising a lot of angst and conflict and, hopefully, some friendship and romance. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the book. I have quite a farm boy kink!