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Dude! Cool freaking chapter. Ok, the cliffhanger very good, and very bad. Space battles are so cool. :2hands: :2hands: :2hands: :2hands:

Man, Bummer, didn't see any of that comming.

ohhhh, those O

Of course, there was this discription of the ships armament in chapter five by Blashame. His inteligence must have been wrong.

Ahhh all things explained, and I was quite wrong. No need to go holding up chapters

Things like when he was buying the the ship it had six Lasers but in combat they only had four? Unless I miss understood things of course.

Dan, I was in the hospital all last week so I missed the cliff hanger. But now I get to go back and read the whole thing all over again. For me. Excelent stuff man. Later Rick

I know what you mean about sex scenes (I love tech stuff), They tend to go beyond my comfort level. Its not that I don't think they should be there it's just that for some reason I can't adjust to the scenes. Though for some reason its never really bothered me in Dawn of Tears, except for the scean where Dylan and Henry were expirimenting with each other but not as much as other such scenes do. Anyway I just wanted to point out that you arn't bizarre atleast not anymore so than anyone else. Later

Dom just wanted say that I am glad you are writing again. I am of course torn now. I don't want your fun to be rained out but I want you to slave a away for hours writing so I can spend my do nothing life reading your wonderful stories. Later

Ok, What dose Gospedene mean. I tried to look it up but no luck. At first I thought it was Garret's first name but that dosen't work unless Gospedene Tremere and he share a name. So I assume it is a title of some sort. I was just wondering if it special connotation beyond just Mr or Miss that I didn't pick up on. Rick