patrick1991

Wow, this was an amazing chapter full of love and happiness... I said to myself, go Shelly! I know this is probably the calm before the proverbial storm returns, but it was fantastic!!!

I do not know why the everyone is praising Jackie killing her child. I understand that he was bad and deplorable, but her killing him gets no praise in my book, so be as it may, this is your book... know it is fiction and if I was to have children and they were like Michael i would not kill him I would not support him , but I would not kill him. another thing she is no better than him that is probably why he turned out that way she should have let the courts decide do not get me wrong he was a bad element pun intended but he was still her child hate the sin not the person...this is a part I did nt like Michael should have did in the attack not at hands of his mother... this is an amazing story and you did a great job I just do not like that part. I think he was sick

wow! the intensity of the battle and details were great!!! Not Aiden good going Ethan!

I just started reading our story , yesterday and I am enjoying it with the exception of the druid part because that reminds me of a cult. I was feeling bad if the alpha had to kill his son, but Michael is sick so sad...