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“Wow, creepy,” Danny said as he climbed from the passenger seat of his Dad's Mercedes saloon and took in the sight before him. The Hotel Coronado stood at the end of a long, winding driveway far away from the main road and now loomed ominously ahead of the pair. Danny could hear the gentle lapping of the waves against the cliff far below. Apart from the sea Danny could hear nothing else which only added to the uneasy feeling he had as he looked over the old Hotel. Whilst the building still
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Teenage sleuth Danny teams up with his father, famous private detective, Steve Wagner, to solve the supposed haunting of an old Hotel.
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More so with Cameron worrying about the real Colonel.
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Cameron’s eyes kept flicking to the door the Colonel had disappeared behind, keen for the older man to come back so he could be in his company. Although the barrier of rank was still very much between them it was nice to see John in a setting outside of work, somewhere where the front of superior and subordinate could be loosened, if even slightly. Absentmindedly, his thoughts still very much on the older man, Cameron took a step foward and managed to collide with another party goer. His o
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He does but not instantly.
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He definitley is. There's an example of that coming up in the next couple of chapters.
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Stay tuned
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Seems to be shaping up that way. A nice contrast in qualities; physical and personal between the two. Glad you seem to be enjoying it so far
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No, thank you
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He's going to have to I think
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I'm thinking we watched some of the same shows It's a lot of fun to reverse the trope so it's now the hunky, handsome man in distress and the hero is another guy.
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Glad to hear that you didn't see it coming and that you're looking forward to what's next
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Thanks so much If you don't mind me asking, what aspects of it do you enjoy the most?
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Cameron told the cabbie to keep the change as he opened the door to find himself standing in front of the Colonel’s townhouse. He gave a small whistle of appreciation at what he saw. When Cameron had moved to the city, he had been fortunate enough to find a snug, one bed apartment to rent in a semi-respectable part of town. The Colonel’s red bricked house was almost palatial in comparison. He did his best to ignore the sudden nervous flutter in his stomach as he made his way up the small se
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Nevermind me, took a brainfart.
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Thanks for the kind words
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Thanks so much How do you see it happening?
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Unfortunately random. I have an idea where the story is going but free time and motivation seems to come in spurts. Might I suggest a follow, to keep updated with my goings-on
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Nicely caught. Maybe it wasn't an accident?
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Morning Caz
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Thanks Mog, glad to see you're enjoying in it
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Thanks Gary, glad you're enjoying it so far.
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He did. Good catch
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He's handsome, charming, successful, looks great in uniform.... We have to keep his feet on the ground somehow
