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  1. Bushman50

    Chapter 11

    I CAN JUST PICTURE TJ GOING FROM WHY ME TO THERE IS A GOD IN HEAVEN WHO CARES BACK AGAIN TO WHY ME AGAIN。HE CANT TAKE A TRICK。FIRST IT IS HIS USELESS MOTHER THEN HIS MONGREL BROTHER IF HE CAN EVEN BE CALLED THAT THEN HE MAKE A SPECIAL FRIEND BUT THEN HE THINKS THE HAS CAUGHT HIM CHEATING 。。。IT JUST KEEPS GOING ON GETTING WORSE AFTER EACH TIME IT GETS BETTER。LIFE FOR TJ JUST SEEMS TO BE ONE BIG SUX FEST。WHEN WILL THEY AND TJ IN PARTUCULAR FINALLY GET ABREAK。
  2. Bushman50

    Chapter 11

    I CAN JUST PICTURE TJ GOING FROM WHY ME TO THERE IS A GOD IN HEAVEN WHO CARES BACK AGAIN TO WHY ME AGAIN。HE CANT TAKE A TRICK。FIRST IT IS HIS USELESS MOTHER THEN HIS MONGREL BROTHER IF HE CAN EVEN BE CALLED THAT THEN HE MAKE A SPECIAL FRIEND BUT THEN HE THINKS THE HAS CAUGHT HIM CHEATING 。。。IT JUST KEEPS GOING ON GETTING WORSE AFTER EACH TIME IT GETS BETTER。LIFE FOR TJ JUST SEEMS TO BE ONE BIG SUX FEST。WHEN WILL THEY AND TJ IN PARTUCULAR FINALLY GET ABREAK。
  3. Bushman50

    WSD Chapter 7

    THE GREAT UNCLE ISNT THEY WANKER WESLEY ITS ACTUALLY GRANTS FATHERS FIRST COUSIN MICHAEL WHO IS THE WANKER。 NOT GRANT S GRANDFATHER OR LLOYDS GRAND FATHER DAVID THAT ARE WANKERS THEY WERE JUST SILLY FOOLS WHO HAD A BAD TIFF AND COULDNT GET PAST IT。MICHAEL WHO GRANT REFERS TO AS UNCLE MICHAEL IN THEIR ONLY PHONE CONVERSATION IS THE ROTTEN EGG OR WANKER。HIS IN FACT SECOND COUSIN WITH GRANT。SO IN FACT LLOYD AND GRANT ARE THIRD COUSINS IN THE THIRD DESCENT OF GENERATION FROM THEIR GRANDFATHERS
  4. Bushman50

    WSD Chapter 7

    WE ARE NEVER TOLD WHY THE FALLING OUT TOOK PLACE ONLY THAT DAVID LLOYDS GRANDFATHER HAD TRIED" TO FIX THINGS AND FOR SOME REASON LLOYDS FATHER MICHAEL TOOK UMBRAGE WITH GRANT CONTACTING THEM WHICH SUGGESTS MICHAEL HAS MAJOR ISSUES WITH PEOPLE。
  5. Bushman50

    WSD Chapter 7

    SHIPSBOY ,A WANKER IS A DEROGATORY TERM FOR SOMEONE WHO IS ARIGHT NASTY PIECE OF WORK。THERE ARE OTHER TERMS SUCH AS A GIT OR NIT SLEAZE OR SLEAZIOD AND SO ON THE AUSTRALIA ABORIGINALS REFER TO SOME ONE LIKE THAT AS A DOG IF THEY ARE IN A RIGHT BAD MOOD。DOUCHE HAS A SIMILAR CONOTATION IN SOME PLACES SOME EVEN ADD BAG TO DOUCHE。IN OTHER WORDS ITS A COLLOQUIALISM。ENGLISH HAS RATHER STRONG PROPENSITY AND BAD HABIT OF APPROPRIATING WORDS AND USING THEM WAYS THAT THEY WERE NEVER TO BE INTENDED。 PEOPLE COULD SAY THE SAME AS YOU DID ABOUT WANKER ABOUT THE F BOMB WORD THAT PEOPLE WITH FOUL TEMPERS OR DIRTY TONGUES WILL USE。
  6. Bushman50

    WSD Chapter 7

    Don't think much of his uncle but like his aunt and cousin. His friends at the Aussie uni are great . And so are his manager Chauffer and house keeper come cookie monster.
  7. Bushman50

    Chapter 3

    Wesley, your not supposed to like the school! Your not a student there Robert is. As I had a sports teacher in high school who was up himself and a really nasty vice principle who was a bully I told them to shove it where there is no shiny things and take a running leap of a cliff. I read in library or did lawn mowing and gardening of the grounds. If I had to visit the deputy I walked five and half miles home instead. There was no way I was going to take the blame for someone else's stupidity.
  8. Bushman50

    OBC Chapter 1

    Anintersting and good start to this story.. I had a great laugh over the snake in the dunny. Cane toads and frogs are goodies too. I dont want to think about big hairy spiders.lol
  9. Bushman50

    WSD Chapter 1

    Hi like this story and feel that I have read it before Good stories are like good wine, they get better as they age.
  10. Bushman50

    DSJ Chapter 16

    Another great chapter. Just wondering if we will hear more about the assassins on the home world and what happened to them! And also what has happened to the greedy graders on earth who had earlier today wanted control of everything and to sieze what they didnot own and create.
  11. This is a great story so far. Knowing in part how it ends and that it isn't a case of happily ever after doesn't detract from it but rather, it adds a somewhat surreal realism to it that we have come to expect in similar situations all to often..... I suspect that his useless bully of a brother may have something to do with what happens plus people like Deanna and Carter who only make things muddier and more difficult for TJ to cope with. Having witness. A large number of such things where someone has offt themselves I don't see how they can go on without getting proper help. Although there are plenty of instances because of distance or a lack of understanding these things do happen. I have spent nearly forty years dealing and living with the effects of bipolar disorder and thoughts of suicide at different times and very nasty judgemental religious family members who stole much of my possessions over a period of time. It's not fun but for my health I had to walk away from it all and have frozen them out of my life to the extent I no longer regard them as family and have nothing to do with them I much happier for it and it was very clear there is justice in the so called justice system as it rewards those that do the wrong while those who do the right thing suffer.
  12. What a great beginning to a new CJ Abello story. It will be interesting to see how it developed as it twelve months behind actual events. Ritchie is such a little spitfire larrikin! How they will keep him on a tight leash I have no idea. But somehow I think CJ will have more to do with his little brother than anyone else as Ritchie adores CJ so much.
  13. Bushman50

    Chapter 4

    Deanna is just a witch butch..... and carter is just plain trouble waiting on two legs or needs saving big time not sure which yet. However since he is a pot head and loves to miss school I think he is the last person TJ should hang with and tj's brother is just a dumb bully.
  14. Bushman50

    Chapter 3

    TJ is quite the tragic figure and begins a dramatic transformation after his walls are broken by a caring teacher and a fellow student who thinks he is drop dead gorgeous and cute but needs to smile more, neither of whom care about his past just his present and future which they can help change for the better and let him see that he has worth and value to them and others as a person regardless of one's past or even present circumstances. It seems TJ has a bad home life from the tiny glimpses we are shown but they sure have done a number on him as a person. Can't wait for more!
  15. What a meaningfull and insightfull look into teen angst, hurt, sadness, loss,etc: I enjoyed reading it and got quite a surprise in how it ended.
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