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Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 9: The dinner to remember!
Zayn's song at dinner ๐ฅฐ -
The door creaked softly as River turned the handle, his heart pounding in his chest. Zayn was inside, standing near the bed, a faint smile on his face as he admired the dark navy suit laid neatly over the duvet. The morning light filtered through the curtains, catching the sharp lines of Zaynโs jaw and the glint in his eyes. He looked so calm, so unbothered โ a picture of composure and quiet confidence. River just stood there in the doorway, frozen. His head felt heavy, his body numb.
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๐๐๐๐คฃ๐คฃ I do? Wait, seriously?
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You're welcome ๐ As for my servants, I'll have a word with them ๐
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What? ๐ ๐คฃ ๐
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I'm sorry, I haven't written any rape content or anything suggesting otherwise. It was a guy waking up in someone's bed without memory of what had happened. If in future there will be flashbacks or anything of unconsented sexual activity, I'll warn beforehand. Otherwise, I'm sorry
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Exactly. He came, he fought and he conquered. Too bad someone had to resort to cheap tactics
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I'll say fingers crossed and cheers to that ๐๐๐๐ Poor River has a lot on his plate and is running out of time.
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Fear is a powerful force, especially being that his mother is the lagoon monster. Imagine having to grow with Veronica and then having no father, obviously not feeling like a true Monroe. That would suck
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Cobwebs is sending me off ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น But Adrian just proved that an apple doesn't really fall too far from the tree. Cobwebs junior is a slithering snake in the dark. River was caught offguard with the news if his father. He has too much on his plate
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Well... it wouldn't be vanalas story without a twist, would it? A character winning all the time would be boring, they need to lose sometimes ๐ ๐
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The morning light spilled softly through the sheer white curtains, painting the room in a golden haze. The air was still, except for the faint hum of the ceiling fan and the gentle rhythm of Riverโs snoring. Zayn stood by the door for a long moment, leaning against the frame, watching him. River was sprawled across the bed like a starfish, half-covered by the blanket that had somehow tangled around his legs. His pajama shirt was buttoned wrongโtwo buttons offโand his hair was a chaotic
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Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
And swallow the key ๐ ๐ -
Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น River bitch slapping academy lol. Got it ๐ ๐ -
Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
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Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
You're right about that. Zayn does seem like someone who's gonna wake up one day and decide he wants Harry back ๐ -
Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
We love a chaotic but sweet guy, don't we all lol -
Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
They really deserve a mention. Liana and Damian are a match made in heaven. I think at this point, Harry should just marry Veronica because both are just delusional ๐ -
Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The party. What could go wrong?
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The morning sun streamed softly through the gauzy curtains, painting the room in golden light. River sat on the edge of the bed, his knees slightly apart, his phone pressed to his ear as he spoke in that boyish, teasing voice that always melted his fatherโs heart. โPa,โ he said dramatically, stretching the word like a child who hadnโt grown up. โYou donโt have to worry about me, okay? Iโm perfectly fine. Youโre the one Iโm supposed to be worrying about.โ A gentle chuckle came through t
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Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
Let me bring some water to cool you off ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ -
Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
I totally agree with you. I don't think Harry can keep a secret like that , especially if it benefits him and whatever he is planning -
Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
I know whom to bring to a fight @Summerabbacatwould read a beotch off in an instant ๐ -
Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
Thank you so much. It seems like Veronica always wants to be the center of attention. She's histrionic and wants to have the last. Regarding River, he did what he had to do since Zayn seems to be thinking about Harry like he's going insane. If I was in his shoes, I'd probably do the same because the guy probably doesn't event see me the same way. Remember how Zayn judged him during those auditions? -
Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: A Heart Unspoken!
๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น paramour Now Harry will definitely come for you. I think Zayn is stuck in that moment of trying to live what could have been with Harry. He doesn't even realize what's going on
