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Chapter 33: The last step!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 33: The last step!
I agree and please, watch this space 😁 -
Chapter 33: The last step!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 33: The last step!
I'm humbled by this @Modified Cub Thank you so much.... This means a lot -
Chapter 33: The last step!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 33: The last step!
You're welcome 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 -
Chapter 33: The last step!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 33: The last step!
Yeah, she realized that all she has done was for her son and also realised she raised him the wrong way. Aiden surprised all of us with how he reacted in the end, he did change and we love a champion who knows when he's wrong. Watch out for more to come.... Very soon -
Chapter 33: The last step!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 33: The last step!
Ikr 😂 😂 😂 Sofia was very unpredictable, she could have easily pulled that trigger and shot Julian. But guess her fear for Arthur was too much compared to her hatred for Julian. She picked survival and she got what she deserved -
Chapter 33: The last step!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 33: The last step!
Thank you so much for giving this story a chance. I'm glad you enjoyed every bit of it. Stay tuned for another amazing story coming your way -
Chapter 33: The last step!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 33: The last step!
Finally over it, and I am gonna miss Julian so much. But I know Dean will take care of him. Dedication to this whole story. Thank you for sticking around, I love you guys -
The cemetery was almost unnaturally quiet. The air moved gently through the trees, carrying with it the faint rustle of leaves and the distant cry of a bird. The private grounds were beautifully maintained, every grave surrounded by trimmed grass and carefully arranged flowers, but there was something haunting about the serenity. It was the kind of silence that made every footstep sound louder than it should. Julian pushed Aiden's wheelchair slowly along the narrow pathway, his hands f
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Chapter 32: The Price of Justice.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 32: The Price of Justice.
We'll see how she's gonna go out and who will go down with her -
Chapter 32: The Price of Justice.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 32: The Price of Justice.
Hoping for the same. But we're about to find out -
Chapter 32: The Price of Justice.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 32: The Price of Justice.
😂 You want the woman bleeding like an idiot -
Aiden lay motionless on the hospital bed, staring at the ceiling as the soft beeping of the monitor beside him continued at a steady rhythm. He had been awake for some time, but he had barely moved. Every time he closed his eyes, his mind dragged him back to that abandoned building. He could still remember the darkness, the flickering light, his mother's trembling voice, and the moment everything had changed. He remembered holding her, believing that perhaps, despite everything that had hap
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Chapter 31: Aiden seeks Julian's help and his desperation builds
vanalas posted new chapter in THROUGH IT ALL
The room seemed to shrink around them. Julian stared at Aiden for several seconds, unable to reconcile the person standing before him with the man he had known for years. Finally, he exhaled slowly. "What are you doing here?" Aiden swallowed. "I told you. I need your help." Julian's expression hardened. "Did Sofia send you?" Aiden immediately shook his head. "No." His voice was barely audible. "I don't even know where she is." Julian frowned. "Wh- 9 comments
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Chapter 30: BLOOD, LIES & RECKONING
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 30: BLOOD, LIES & RECKONING
😂 😂 It's the old geezer for me. You know Arthur is demented but now he's out of hand -
Chapter 30: BLOOD, LIES & RECKONING
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 30: BLOOD, LIES & RECKONING
Sofia cannot escape now, Arthur is already on her case and you know how dangerous that man is. And now that he's out for blood, let's see if she can outsmart him -
Chapter 30: BLOOD, LIES & RECKONING
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 30: BLOOD, LIES & RECKONING
That's a good question ⁉️ Where is Sofia and what's she gonna do? I'm glad that she we finally get to see her being known by what she is -
The interrogation room had begun to feel smaller. Not because the walls had moved, but because time had. The fluorescent light above Sofia's head hummed with a faint, irritating buzz, casting a cold white glow over everything—the metal table, the two chairs, the dark camera mounted high in the corner, and the woman sitting perfectly still beneath it. For what felt like an eternity, Sofia had been answering the same questions. And every time, the answer was exactly the same. She ha
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Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
Hopefully we're not dealing with someone who knows how to hide evidence very well, if she didn't destroy it already 🤞 -
Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
😂 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Twists and turns, really? Well, let's just hope the truth stares at us in the coming chapter. So hold on to your seats because it's gonna be a bumpy ride.... Very soon -
Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
Sofia is cunning, calculating and very deceitful So we get to know that the man who was stalking her at that time was actually Aiden's father and she killed him in that abandoned building. At least, that's one mystery box we've opened but how many does she have? -
Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
I dedicate this song to Robert's regret and Julian wishing he had more time with his father. Goodbye, Robert Hayes! 😭
