Danilo Syrtis
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Wow, another cliffhangers adept 😑 just a question : what happens if a skinwalker transitioned into a male deer and a female deer ? 🤔 Excellent chapter 👍
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LOL I was going to say the same 😂
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LOL that would be fun to see the hohrahn crowded with 4 bears and the shaman swearing because of the things crashed 😂 indeed they were lucky the archer wasn’t good with his hunt 😅 excellent chapter 👍
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Scents, gas ? I know someone interested by that in the « korner » 😂
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Hmm, if the shaman wanted to limit skinwalkers population, he should put in the rituals a limitation about the life 😉 excellent chapter 👍 and congrats to @Al Norris for winning the lottery 😂
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Very interesting chapter about the ceremony 👍
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This chapter about the skinwalkers background confirms the old saying « Power corrupts » 😑 Wow the haatali was the original one ! 😄 @Bill W, your skinwalkers universe has a lot of potential great stories ! Excellent chapter 👍
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Government taking Native American lands is another sad part of History. Colonial History is full of these sad things LOL « where are the toilets » has always been the first information I ask when I go somewhere. Great chapter 👍
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no robbery 😂 I was suggesting that Dev would be interested if it is explained by someone who is working in managing money, since Dev is supposed to manage his family money 😄
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I guess that if Dev had « Mark Williams » as teacher, he wouldn’t have got that A- 😆 May be he should do a little stage in his bank 😄 excellent chapter 👍
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LOL I don’t know about Mac, but I’m sure I won’t remember all the informations 😆 great chapter 👍
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LOL I too thought like Mac that the 4 legs move with opposite legs 😄 hmm did Devin try to transition in horse and/or walk on nails ? 😆 that’s would be interesting to see 🤣 no internet in the cabin 😱 guess no modern young people would survive there even with no mountain lions😂 interesting chapter 👍
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I saw once a documentary about that Navajo Code : very instructive. Everything was said, so I just add : Great chapter 👍
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Very interesting Apache History and excellent chapter 👍
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Hmm what if Mac’s parents meet Barry in the futur and start thanking him for inviting the boys ? 🤔 Imo, they should make a lie with some truth inside : easier to keep the lie 😄 Great chapter 👍 and Happy 4th July to all the American Readers 🎉
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Things were coming fast and in good timing ! The rapids was caught and Grandpa Isaac found the shaman (the 4th generation). 🙂 « What if » Devin were hurt by the rapist and that some blood dropped ? And what about injuries when Devin transitions ? 🤔 Is there anything that can block the transition ? « Use their words against them ». I bet every parents were once children and use it against their own parents 😆 and the reverse is also true : parents also often use their children words against them 😁 Excellent chapter 👍
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Scaring ! Is it a walking dead skin ? Or a skinwalking dead ? 🤣
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Finally ! 😁 but I agree with Mac : Dev spent too much time hunting the rapist. Excellent chapter 👍
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Good idea to add some mysteries to the story. Even if Mac couldn’t go with Dev, he might suggest ideas about how to spot the rapist : I agree it is not good to let Dev have all the leadership. Barry would be surprised if Dev transition into a turtle in front of him 😂
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LOL I don’t think you need anyone to defend you, sensei Bill 😆 : you kicked the bad peacock (another feathered !😂), don’t you remember ? 😁
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Are you saying @raven1 is a feather-walker ?
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I think I already said you are Dev-ious
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Hmm if a Santa doesn’t know what a child want then it is not the real Santa ! 😂 but it is still good to see Santa with his Elf 😆 The grandpas suggested a treasure hunting ? Imo, they are going to hide the money somewhere and would let Dev and Mac find it 🤣 Great chapter 👍
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I too wonder about what did Devin’s father 😁 Excellent chapter 👍
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LOL I was thinking Dev would switch into some bear or grizzly, but Bigfoot giving the finger is a lot funnier 😁 I also agree with @raven1 : Dev using his ability for his own benefit and to break a friendship isn’t honorable 😑 Excellent chapter 👍
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